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*snorts* this line of thinking is so in Lars' head. It sounds exactly like he would think. I love how even your character's points of view are uniquely /them/.

ridiculous-yet-appealing fantasy of tickling him until he peed his pants a little.

I seriously snorted again here and then laughed because the snort wasnt enough. Just after reading it I had the same GD fantasy.

Also Lars =( I know we're not supposed to show sympathy... so just, you know, don't show him this review. I was so sad reading that.

“Okay, asshole. Can I order some cake, before we get the check?”

HAHA <3 oh, Patrick. You're such a dork.

I love the way you took the 'blood' prompt. Awesome! I didn't even think of it that way, though I was trying to think of something imaginative.

I really love this story and the characters. I can't wait to meet the brother. Man I bet he's repressed!

I just found this story and I really like it, it's awesome! Patrick is just too cute :D haha.. I hope to see more soon.

Yeah! I'm loving this story. So far Larson is coming across as gruff and snarky, but I also don’t think his manager would work so hard for him if he was truly undeserving of her time. I like that Patrick seems to make him a little kinder and more open. You can really see the affect Patrick has on his mood. ( : Ah and then there’s Patrick. Guh…awkward and clumsy and well meaning. Write a letter to my libido why don’t you? I would like to know more about Patrick since we have so much about Larson: job, apartment, family…Looking forward to the next chapter!

Wow, poor Larson! What a life! His mom's a real dirtbag, not even trying to stay clean for her son? And the Love's keeping the brother's apart just because Larson isn't straight? Shame on them!

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more! :)

I'm really enjoying this story! It's light and funny in all the right places, and I'm terribly entertained. Write more please!

@____@ MORE UPDATES~~~!!!!!!!!! lovin it so far~~~~~!!

Awesome! Im really enjoying this!!! Oh yeah!! Love patrick n lars!!!! Yay!!!!!!

Oh gawd, poor Patrick lol. All that flustered fanboi'ing and now he'll probably faint or throw up on the table! So much adorable. I think I could fall in love. He's so awkward *snort* Definitely, definitely can't wait to read what he does. Does he get mad? Does he faint? Does he barf? Does he run his mouth so fast that no one can get a word in until they have to bodily remove him from the line?

Also... how freakin adorable is that Lars was up and ready? Poor Brigid might be the one that ends up fainting!

I really like this story a lot so far. Patrick sound like an absolute sweetheart. Lars is great. I would love it if you used these characters in one-shots in addition to this story. Please update soon!!

Hi! Just wanted to say I really enjoy this story and am looking forward to the next update :)