rate_review Reviews

A very well-written and great story. Got me hooked right from the start! Seems like some crazy drama is about to start. Can't wait to read more. :)

OMG, I so agree with Hugazombie. Dan is bad news! And I'm so confused at what the hell is going on here. Is Dan Kendra's fiance? and I don't trust Spencer. He's going to try and steal Lars away from Patrick, just like Dan is going to try and steal Patrick away from Lars. Shit. I hate this!!! lol.

I don't know. I don't think Patrick should be meeting Dan. It seems that Dan could be a nice distration or something and could definitely come between Patrick and Lars. But I am curious to find out why he gave a fake number. I don't remember from my last review, but did Dan know who the fake number belonged to?

I'm so glad you're back! I really love this story! :)

How cute! I have a pitbull too; they're adorable and get really bad reps.

What color is he? Maybe you can think of a name based on his color. Blackie, chocolate, Idk.....I'm too original! lol No imagination. :(

And...I just saw the movie Patrick was talking about! So depressing it's the last one. Would be awesome if J.K. did start writing about the next generation. I'm so glad Draco was saved; he's definitely the hottest! lol

So...I'm really curious as to why Dan finally decided to call Patrick. What excuse could he possibly give? And omg, it just hit me: did Dan KNOW the number he gave Patrick belonged to Lars? That just came to mind when I was trying to think of reasons why Dan gave him a fake number. Does he know Lars? Omg, was Lars an ex??????

Hahah, sorry, just got carried away there! Ok, can't wait for the next chapter; I'm on pins and needles here! :)

Ok this is getting very interesting with all the new characters, but I'm also getting confused. Is Spencer the one who's calling Patrick? The one in the black car? Or is it the girl's fiance in the last paragraph? I'm assuming she's pregnant?

Anyway, great chapter, as usual, and hopefully I'll be able to put two and two, (or three and three, depends on how many new characters there are!) together in the next chapter! :)

Oh, and Darla and her father: EWWWWWWW!!!!!!! :( lol

Holy crap! Who's stalking Patrick? Oh man, Lars could call Brigid and she could get a whole SWAT team out to investigate!

Awesome chapters (I had to play catch-up today); totally hysterical! I really love the way Patrick and Lars communicate! Oh, and the dialogue isn't bad either, lol. Awesome smut scene, btw, excellent for a newbie! :)

Oh totally creepy. And definitely 'strange'. I'm confused (maybe I'm meant to be?) about if he's stalking Lars because of Patrick or Patrick because of Lars? I think it's the latter, but it's still making my heart go EEP. Also all the mothers in this are cracking me up. The mother-in-law moment especially and its resulting conversation - her son and his best friend living with her forever. I lawled so hard. Creating a serial killer, indeed. *snort*

Oh Jenny I lawled and couldn't get the smile off my face the whole time I was reading it. I knew what was coming(haha) with the amount of alcohol he had and yet I still lawled and enjoyed it completely. That's the thing about great writing, even if it's a little predictable - like romance novels in general - it's the characters that make it so unique and awesome.

I just love Patrick and his /love/ of everything when drunk. He loves the song and the bartender and the bar and his drink. HILARIOUS.

I now love the slash pile even more for making these prompts and giving me this story!

First smutty writing huh? Careful it's like your first pack of smokes. ; D I thought their date was very cute and the sexual chem between them was hot hot hot. Loved the freaked out cab driver. Patrick is kind of the best thing ever. Lars is a lucky guy. And "They were totally going to have sex, tonight." FTW

Ah, you tease! Well so far your smut writing is A+++++++! lol I'm assuming Patrick, sweet, drunk Patrick, passed out while he was waiting for Lars to come back from his condom/lube search. Well, so much for that! lol

Hopefully now they'll pick up where they left off, providing Patrick doesn't hurl all over the plush carpet! hahah