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(13) Now that was definitely a plot twist :) You know I did catch that the senator said child and not children and I thought that maybe you made a mistake but than how could you forget one of your own characters, I felt another twist coming.^^ On the other hand it does sound like Lars' mom could actually forget a kid, unravelling all that with Gabe and his mom and why she didn't say anything might be interesting. I think the senator is in for way more than he bargained for. I kind of worry he's going to have some expectations that Lars (and Gabe) aren't going to be able to fill or want to fill. This seems to be a running theme with the people around Lars and Patrick. Also I'm beginning to feel a little sorry for the poor wives and girlfriends in your story, they certainly have to deal with their fair share of drama.

Lots going on definitely can't wait for the next update, I bet the how-was-your-day talk over dinner is going to be more than enough to make Patrick speechless, which is no small feat ;) Looking forward to the next chapter ^_^

Ch. 13: SO FREAKING EXCITED YOU UPDATED!! Oh holy shit! Senator Hammond maybe Larson's father! Wow! Now everything makes perfect sense! But how could the Senator not know about Gabriel! Certainly his investigation would have gotten him Lar's birth certificate which should have shown he was a twin. I'm anxious now to find out why he didn't know!

This story is getting really good now.

Poor Dan wanting to come out only if he knows Patrick will be there for him. Kendra has Ovarian Cancer and doesn't want to lose Dan.

And could the sex between Larson and Patrick get any hotter??? I don't think so. They are so cute together...talking dirty to each other and such. :)

I read through the first 13 in one sitting and man i am hooked but what do your characters look like

Okay, NOT what I expected. Nice. Good to see this is still going!

(12) Confessions, I love yous and sex all in one, we can officially say this was a great chapter :) Patrick and Lars work so well together so I'm glad Patrick came clean, it wouldn't have felt right if he hadn't he doesn't seem like that kind of guy.

I wonder what it's going to be like when Lars meets Dan and what they'll think of each other. Lars won't be too impressed but Dan will be interesting because he's getting to see the kind of guy Patrick has a relationship with. Right now Dan makes me think of when your a teenager and it's your first love, everything is so dramatic (&obsessive). He doesn't even really know Patrick, maybe he'll hate the incessant babbling among other things, his vision of Patrick has been built up in his mind with little real information, the real Patrick may not measure up to the fantasy. As for Dan, I'm still reserving judgement depending on how he acts from now on including how he deals with Kendra, I just hope he doesn't wreak to much havoc.

As you may be able to tell from my rambling, looking forward to the next update^^ especially since we have the senator mystery to look forward to :)

So, when will Lars ask Patrick to move in? The ending of this chapter made me squee! :)
Great chapter too! I'm so glad Patrick told Lars about Dan (I love his babbling too) and Lars didn't freak out. I'm glad he's looking out for Patrick too, because sometimes he's just too sweet and it could cause him some troubles...
And Dan really has to change some things in his life. I just hope he won't marry his fiancée if she tells him about her cancer just because of that. It wouldn't be nice for her and they would probably be very unhappy people in the end. To be honest, I didn't feel much sympathy for him, but at least I'm glad he seems to genuinely love Kendra, even though it isn't romantically. He really needs to come clean now and support her as much as he can through her illness (if she still wants him around)... and maybe find a man for himself (who isn't Patrick)?
Now for the meeting between Lars and Dan, I'd love to see Lars and Patrick arrive together with their puppy to show off their domestic bliss (and to sick the puppy on Dan if he makes advances on Patrick)... :D But of course you'll decide and I'll eagerly await the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!

Omg, Patrick is so cute! You love me too? lol

Lars better keep him on a short leash (not that Patrick would do anything) b/c everyone seems to love Patrick!

Great chapter. I think Lars and Patrick need to find someone for Dan, so Dan can get his mind off Patrick. Oh and Dan really needs to come clean with Kendra. But what's he gonna do now that she's knocked up? Omg, what if she doesn't even tell him and he confesses to her? Shit, that would be bad.

Ok, sorry, I'm getting carried away. Looking forward to more! :)

Yeah! I was so excited when I saw you posted a new chapter! A nice little present to get on a Saturday morning :) Ok, thank goodness Patrick told Lars about his secret meeting with Dan. Poor Dan, I am really feeling bad for him now. Patrick has such a huge heart. I love Lar's comments about him wanting to feed the strays...too funny! And they finally said "I love you" to each other...awwwwww. Well I know this isn't going to last so I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for these two. Dan isn't going to go away and there is still the unresolved issue with the Senator.

yay im glad you didnt make him get with dan, I really like your story and I dont want you to ruin it with cheating! keep writing I love reading this :)

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