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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great dynamics between these two, i'm anticipating some explosive (hot) scenes between Taylor and Matt!!
One thing though... i'm confused about what they are wearing, is Taylor basically naked but with straps here and there covering strategic places? How is Matt's the same yet only his neck and hands exposed?
Will definitely be keeping an eye out for updates, Power play/ D/s stories are my favorite, especially when the characters unashamed and honest/proud about their respective kinks!!
One thing though... i'm confused about what they are wearing, is Taylor basically naked but with straps here and there covering strategic places? How is Matt's the same yet only his neck and hands exposed?
Will definitely be keeping an eye out for updates, Power play/ D/s stories are my favorite, especially when the characters unashamed and honest/proud about their respective kinks!!
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this, it's light and funny for a story that involves cops chasing down a murderer. When I read your first chapter I was so amused by Taylor putting Matt in his place and it only got better after that. Your grammar isn't that bad, unless you have a beta editing this before you put it up or something then nothing was too apparent- I would know since English grammar is one of my specialties. So I liked this and look forward to seeing where you take it.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant, i adore your story so far, the only thing is i would maybe liek a little bit more description of what they look like/what they are wearing.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter! I would have loved to read what Brannigan thought of Taylor's outfit.
Well, they definitely seem to hate one another, so it should be interesting at the club! lol
The only mistakes I noticed were when you capitalized the first letters of the rooms in Taylor's apt. Kitchen and Living Room. The "K", "L" and "R" don't need to be capitalized. Other than that, it was great! :)
Well, they definitely seem to hate one another, so it should be interesting at the club! lol
The only mistakes I noticed were when you capitalized the first letters of the rooms in Taylor's apt. Kitchen and Living Room. The "K", "L" and "R" don't need to be capitalized. Other than that, it was great! :)
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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Taylor Swift :-)
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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wooooooohooooooooo. This is going to be a great story!!! Can't wait until we get more into the S&M part.
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this already. It just goes to show looks can be deceiving. I hope you update this quickly. Keep up the good work and thanks!
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, you got the idea from the other story about two cops going undercover because of young gay men being murdered and raped, yeah? I think it got deleted or something, can't find it. Anyway, can't wait to see where you go with this! Update soon neh? :)
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Loving it so far! Looks like Matthew may have underestimated his new temp partner! Loved the name, btw: Taylor Swift Montgomery! lol
Can't wait for chapter two! :)
Can't wait for chapter two! :)
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Intersting start. Can't wait for more.