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I've tried reviewing this twice and my internet died ¬¬ Anyway, great story! I love it! It's really well done and I hope that the next chapter comes along soon. I know your busy and yeah that sucks, still, I'm patient :P
Hope Matt and Taylor get together! <3

Hmmmm, Just wondering but are you ever going to get back to updating on a regular schedule again? I know your note said you are busy with finals and your social life but it's been WAY too long. So, pretty please, could you continue. I really like these two cops very much and I hope story isn't abandoned. I was reading a really good one that I was into and now it is missing along with the author so I am getting stressed that the same will happen to this one. I may not review anymore until story is complete, don't know yet, it depends but I will continue watching for updates.

xD Awwww poor Matt! Getting attacked by a cat when you try to move in for a kiss...must suck XD I can't wait to read more and see what the next trip to the club will bring~

I really liked this I hope that you continue it soon.

Ok, I really don't think I like the new Brett character and bet he is the killer??!! I hope he hasn't set his
eyes on Taylor!!!

Things are beginning to get even more interesting now and I am thinking that when they go back to the club they will be able to narrow in on the killer. I think whoever it is may be getting brazen and will do something soon.

I am happy Matt and Taylor kind of 'bonded' a little in this chapter.

I loved the end of chapter when Matt walked Taylor to his apartment door and was cat attacked by Smokey. Awe, the kitty is protective of his 'mommy' and can see the fireworks starting between them now.

I really like this story very much but wonder why you don't have even more reviews for it but the rating are great!!!!

Ahaha, cute w/Smokey! I think Smokey interrupted a "moment", lol. Maybe he did it on purpose? Hmmmmm Smokey's jealous of "mommy's" friends? And why mommy and not daddy? lol

Well, hopefully tomorrow they can try to narrow down the suspects at that sex club. Gee, how many more times do they have to go back? They may need to buy more outfits! lol

Oh, I sense a wonderful friendship forming between Matt and Smokey... But I'm sure the cat was just defending his owner's chastity or something. That or he just liked the feel of leather under his claws. Nice input, though, but that could create some problems as the romance advances. And the timing may not have been that good because it looked like Matt was going to kiss Taylor before the interruption. Was he?
I liked Matt much more here too. I'm glad he apologised and protected Taylor, and that they focused on their investigation too. They do seem to work well together. I knew that the detectives can't really be lovey-dovey from the start, but I was more bothered with the insensitivity and lack of respect from Matt, particularly because he was supposed to have more experience in S&M than his complete beginner (and not even really into it) partner. Happy to know that they have a safe word too.
May I say that I don't care much for Mason and Brett, though? They deserve a kick in the groin or a strong case of impotence (that way Nathan might be interested in finding a new Dominant too). Or a good clawing from Smokey in a very sensitive part of their anatomy (I'm sure Matt would have a good laugh at that too).
Taylor is full of surprises. I'm sure his lap dance felt like a kind of revenge, but he seems to be attracting lots of guys, including creepy stalkerish ones. I guess that's the point, but I'm still concerned for him since he needs to act meek to protect their cover, so he has to depend on Matt a lot. His behaviour with his cat kind of destroyed his tough attitude, though, if that's what he wanted to portray for Matt. Cute, though (I particularly liked the paw waving). :)
Very interesting story, and I'm really getting into the investigation, so I'm glad the relationship development doesn't take complete precedence over the plot. I think the plot and relationship were particularly well-balanced in this chapter, and thanks for the extra length too!

Chappy 6 review /

Well worth the wait and it was enjoyably long as well as very entertaining.

I absolutely loved when Taylor did his lap dance/belly dancing for Matt whom I think really enjoyed it way to much, lol.

I hope that Taylor will be careful because I was really worried for him with this new 'Hulk' fellow. I know he can protect himself but what if the guy had slipped him a drug (like Matt thought for a second) or something else. Thankfully, they weren't in a room where there were drinks because that could have happened and then Taylor could have been an easy target for the 'Hulk' to have his way with him.

I am in love with Smokey but kind of felt bad for poor Matt. Awe, Taylor is a mommy and Matt 'the daddy'?

I am still worrying who the killer might be and there seem to be a lot of possible suspects.

I hope that Nathan can find a kinder dominant to control him because I still hate Mason and am considering him as one of the susupects.

Super duper chapter and totally fun to read............

Okay, I still like the story and particularly Taylor's character, but after this chapter I just wish Taylor will kick Matt in the groin when they leave, because he seriously deserves it. I found myself quite upset with Matt's behaviour there, who acted like a big bully and was unnecessarily cruel, using the excuse of the audience to do whatever he pleased to Taylor without his consent. From what I've heard and read about S&M, the relationship between a couple is based on trust and the submissive should be respected by the dominant and ultimately the one in control and having the power to stop everything if it goes too far for him or her. I think that before they went to the club, Matt and Taylor should have imperatively researched the world of S&M (to be as in character as possible) and discussed what each of them could or could not accept and agreed on a safe-word, particularly when neither of them seems familiar with the S&M scene to begin with. As beginners they should be allowed to start slow and Matt should be extremely attentive of Taylor's needs, instead of being intent on hurting and humiliating him. I do hope he will redeem and get over himself soon, otherwise Taylor could legitimately ask for another partner. It's a dangerous mission too, so how could they think of completing it successfully without trust? Matt is certainly not doing much to earn Taylor's...
I hope I haven't offended you since it was not my intention at all. I really liked the beginning of the story, but I had hoped that Matt's arrogance would be put aside for work as he seemed to be serious about his job. Maybe I had also hoped that beside his tough exterior he could have a softer side, but that may be just wishful thinking on my part... :)

I really like this story and never thought I would be into the S&M scene but you have made it very interesting. I think Taylor is so cute even more so than the real Taylor Swift (I don't like her) and Matt (I don't know about him yet but I do think he has potential if only he wouldn't be such an ass to Taylor all the time). Looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops as they search for this killer whom I am thinking may be Mason but not sure yet. I like Matt's friend Cam and was wondering if his wife will make an appearance in your story later.