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by Buumkin

person dazedandconfused
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I could have sworn that when I read this story late yesterday it didn't allow anonymous reviews so you must have changed it. Interesting story and I enjoyed first chapter. I wonder if Ardent is going to discover that Siran might end up being more than he can handle.
person J42
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely start! Your writing seems to have improved since Spliced. Thanks for sharing this!