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June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I am so happy to see a new chapter of this. I am eager to see how the story will come to an end. I feel sorry for all the slaves on that planet. Hoepfully Ardent will be able to keep Siran by his side.
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the way this story is developing. and the character development of siran and ardent. glad you're taking the story past the initial 4 chapters you envisaged - because this world seems to be really coming alive. thanks!
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I remembered this story the other day but I forgot the title. Good thing I found it today! I hope you post a new chapter up soon! <3
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May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gosh! I am so hoping that Ardent will be able to keep Siran by his side. Lovely chapter. I love how they just went at it with Nasserin in the room. i think Ardent will fit in very nicely on that planet.
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Siran's life is so hopeless though. I hope he can find a way to stop being a slave.
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ardent certainly was enjoying himself when he was tying Siran up. I hope they do get to check out one of the rooms at the inn. I can see how Ardent is getting attached to Siran.
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.
The second chapter (and the first too) is great.
Interesting characters, hot sex, nice location what does a girl want more.
Oh, one tiny little thing, please let there be a happy end!
So I'm looking foreward to more of this story.
The second chapter (and the first too) is great.
Interesting characters, hot sex, nice location what does a girl want more.
Oh, one tiny little thing, please let there be a happy end!
So I'm looking foreward to more of this story.
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That second update had me blushing *^^ Can't wait for more!
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. i am guessing that the people Siran had to kill were people he knew. it is too bad they can't run away to freedom. I wonder how their master keeps them from escaping. Ardent is getting quite the education on this trip. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and the setting. Very interesting characters. I can't wait to read some more.