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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just typed a review and the whole thing just disappeared on me because I typed the stupid word wrong in the box. I hate that thing. So, I will try it again and apologize if review gets duplicated.
Alright, just when Julian finally figures out what is wrong with Raven and is about to go rescue him the blasted doorbell rings and in walks Henry and Emma who makes Julian her slave!!!!! What the heck did she do to him? I know that he will eventually come out of it and torture her & when he does it won't be pretty. Maybe, Sebastian will come back because he forgot something and that will mess their plan up.
I hope they don't leave with the painting especially if Raven's in it and they know he is!!!!!!
I wonder if Desmond's with him again and why Gabriel hasn't knocked down Julian's front door if Desmond is missing in action too.
Alright, just when Julian finally figures out what is wrong with Raven and is about to go rescue him the blasted doorbell rings and in walks Henry and Emma who makes Julian her slave!!!!! What the heck did she do to him? I know that he will eventually come out of it and torture her & when he does it won't be pretty. Maybe, Sebastian will come back because he forgot something and that will mess their plan up.
I hope they don't leave with the painting especially if Raven's in it and they know he is!!!!!!
I wonder if Desmond's with him again and why Gabriel hasn't knocked down Julian's front door if Desmond is missing in action too.
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that I havent reviewed every chapter but you update to fast for that. However I love how fast you update and dont want you to stop updating. You are a wonderful writer and i just love your story. Oh and as for Raven he really needs to learn how to tell when he first learns something. He is really stupid and he wouldnt get into half of the crap if he just trust his enner voice sometimes. If he did he could have avoided this problem. Oh and Julian is a wonderful acter and I cant wait to see what he does to that stupid pair. They are so in for it now. I read chapter 9 twice just because of the ending.
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was getting ready to go to bed and just checked in to see what stories had been updated and found
chapter 9.
Something tells me that this mirror ghost knew either Julian or Desmond and is now out for revenge but poor Raven got caught in the middle of her vendenta.
I kind of feel bad for Henry but not Emma she's a bitch and deserves everything Julian is going to dish out of her.
Bring it on Julian and punish her for wasting your precious time when you could have been saving Raven. But no on second thought maybe you should wait until Raven is safe then do it.
chapter 9.
Something tells me that this mirror ghost knew either Julian or Desmond and is now out for revenge but poor Raven got caught in the middle of her vendenta.
I kind of feel bad for Henry but not Emma she's a bitch and deserves everything Julian is going to dish out of her.
Bring it on Julian and punish her for wasting your precious time when you could have been saving Raven. But no on second thought maybe you should wait until Raven is safe then do it.
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, more updates!!
I love how fast your stories are updated,
especially since i'm always anxious to read what's going to happen next!
& methinks, this ghost lady seems to know both Raven & Julian well, man i hope it's Magda from your previous story "Debts", something tells me that if she had a chance to come back as a ghost to torture these two, she'd have a fine time doing it.
I love how fast your stories are updated,
especially since i'm always anxious to read what's going to happen next!
& methinks, this ghost lady seems to know both Raven & Julian well, man i hope it's Magda from your previous story "Debts", something tells me that if she had a chance to come back as a ghost to torture these two, she'd have a fine time doing it.
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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just realized this story is a continuation of Debts and am so happy you are continuing with it in this new one.
I think Julian took it all rather well when Raven surprised him under the table at the restaurant. He got his revenge in the bathroom too.
I don't know but I am worried now about Raven and the way he always gets himself into some sort of trouble. I hope he doesn't find some antique old painting that is cursed or something and then buys it using Julian's credit card.
His luck he'll either get sucked into the painting and disappear or some evil person will come out of it and try killing him, or even worse fall in love with him.
I think Julian took it all rather well when Raven surprised him under the table at the restaurant. He got his revenge in the bathroom too.
I don't know but I am worried now about Raven and the way he always gets himself into some sort of trouble. I hope he doesn't find some antique old painting that is cursed or something and then buys it using Julian's credit card.
His luck he'll either get sucked into the painting and disappear or some evil person will come out of it and try killing him, or even worse fall in love with him.
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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see you are there's another continuation in the "specter" universe stories! Each story just keeps getting better & more exciting!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Allright, now I know something is going to happen to Raven the minute Julian leaves for that meeting about the merger. Yep. I can see it coming. I only hope that Julian gets back sooner than Saturday afternoon. Maybe Desmond will help Raven out with whatever bad thing I am sure is about to happen to him.
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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now that Julian has left Raven to go on his buisness trip I know it's going to happen again. At least Desmond will be with him in his dreams part of the time and if things get too bad maybe he can come wake Raven up or something. I don't think Julian was too happy to hear about Desmond again either. I am so happy you are a very fast writer and still don't understand why more readers are not reviewing your stories becauses they are really good.