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for The Dreamtrap

by ConcertoInD

person zvrina
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting read! Love this series!!!
I don't think I would have loved this as much if it was only about that psycho Julian, but since my beloved Des and Gabriel are here as well, I enjoyed this thoroughly. ;)
Love Raven as well (although his sadistic side can catch you by surprise), and even Julian has his good moments, but if only he would mellow out and stop his torture parties, all would be well.
I love your various plot twists, very original!
Looking forward to the next installment in the series!!!!
person fudge
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story, can't wait for the next!
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was a heelll of a lot of fun even if that freak Julian makes my skin crawl.
I love all four of these to date. Hell, if you could sell em as a book, I'd buy it. ^^
person fluffiebunny
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD nice, i would have played the same trick Raven, even at the mercy of a homocidal lover!!
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Henry? Will Madga come back using his body for revenge and they won't know.
person fluffiebunny
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Magda wont stay dead!!!!
I really enjoyed reading your story!!!
I stillcan't get over all the plot twists it's had, and i can't wait to read the next installment of this series!!!
Please keep up the great work, and keep writing!!!
person fluffiebunny
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!! Fight the madness Desmond!!!!
person fudge
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! Ur amazing at what u do
person fudge
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love these people you've created :)
person fluffiebunny
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how begrudgingly pleasant they all are to one another, it's like that unwanted roomate you have to keep in order to make rent XD
keep up the good work! I wanna find out more about this number 40 precaution Magda was so thoughtful to cover up along with that mysterious spider brooch she sent them!