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This is a very interesting story. Please, in the name of all that is hot and intriguing, continue with this fic!

Hi, your story is really good! But.. It would have been greater if only you didn't add those French sentences! I didn't understand anything and french is my first language...
Believe me, I nearly stopped reading the second chapter altogether because of that... I'm sorry if I seem harsh but it was REALLY anoying. For example the french for "it's about time you got laid" may be "il était temps que tu te trouves quelqu'un (pour partager ton lit)" (I know, French is weird and you need more words to express something than in English).

Good luck for your next chapters...

Awesome story. I love the characters. Even Mona has a delightful personality. I can't wait to read some more. How will Reese and Daniel meet again I wonder? Update soon please.

please say this is continuing. It's so cute.

I really liked this start. The way the blind man was protecting the weak, made it really touching and they are a lot stronger than most give them credit for.
Hope you update again soon

This is a new theme. I like this, good characters.

Interesting. I like that you're writing involves a character that is blind, they don't get enough homage. I'm curious to see where you take this and how they'll meet each other in the future.

Very, very good! I like how you made him French, it suits him. I can't wait to see where you take these characters.

I love this story. Its coming along very well in my opinion, and I heart Reese to peices (lol). I hate that he is blind but I think it will make things that much more. . .I guess special between them because he is blind and he is falling possibly for something he cant see. Anyway, I would love more! Please update!!!

This was really good, I love the characters! I can't wait for the next update, keep the long chapters coming! :)