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wow that was awesomely hot! I hope to goodness this won't be a one off because i, for one, will be waiting for the next part.

You snuck a vampire in^^ I wasn't sure if that really was the direction you were going, even I was thinking he was simply a bartender but of course as soon as you mentioned that yourself I realized it probably wasn't that simple. I sometimes have issues with certain kinds of vampire stories but I have to admit that you do have me rather curious about Roan but then that is how it should be since vampires are supposed to be mysterious :) Also I loved how Elijah has this terribly regular life going about his business except for the one little thing of (not spying) watching his neighbour. It's funny how something that seems so small like a guy who goes out at night could totally capture your imagination. Wonderful story, I loved the guys and the chemistry between them, it's just too bad this is the end of it ^_^

Okay. First, I ADORE this chapter! Second, it's written fantastically, very genuine, not forced, which I also love. :) And, thirdly, the chemistry between these two is great. Awesome first chapter. Can't wait for the next update!! X3

BijouDuMon,

I'm glad you liked it, but this is all there is. :) It's just a short story, a prequel to a novella I am working on professionally. I'm flattered that it read so well!

Thank you,
S.L. Armstrong

Wow that was hot!!!! Please tell me for wich story of yours this is the prequal!!!! I want more!!!! My mail is kuraitenschi@web.de