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November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
excellent story keep up the good work
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far im intrigued to find out what happens and how they get together. ^.^ Keep writing. <3
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! Does Jack's friend like Brennan? Will they fall in love?? LOVED YOUR STORY! Pls update soon!
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I think this is a good start so far :) I wish you would add just a little more details though. Like what Jack and his friends look like. It kinda helps me remember what character is who. The names kinda just fall into the rest of the words. :D well I hope you plan on updating this, I really like it!