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for Debts

by ConcertoInD

person lakuniko
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Raven and Julian, so I very satisfiled with this part. it so mystery and lovely at

the same time. sweet and romantic in the best way. (I tend to dislike overy romantic

slash fic, cause it seem fake.) You very great author. I very in love with your

writings. Thank you so much...^^
person zvrina
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am happy to see that Julian is successfuly managing his "wild" side, he isn't such a psycopathitic monster as much as he was in the Specter's Gamble. I wouldn't have believed that I would like a love story of such an evil man, but somehow you made it work!!!! Was hoping that Raven's love would be enough for Julian to stop the tortures and rapes completely, but as it seems that Raven is a bit of a sadist himself, he doesn't see anything wrong with it...sigh...
Des has new powers!! hehehe Love Des and Gabriel!

You are a really good author!! :) :)
person Roya7777
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I was very busy the past few days, just finished reading Debts and ohh my God, it was very interesting and I saw your new fic which is the continuous of Debs and I know I shouldn't read it, I should go back and read Specter first but I can't ...

Why didn't I find you sooner?!!! :(

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Em something else, I started this without knowing Des And Gab, my heroes were Julian and Raven! I love them first! I think it's hard for me to read the rest of D&G story but not J&R!!! I think they would be a cross-story in your next fic when Des goes to Julian to collect his debt!!! but that's just not enough for me! could you include them more in your stories (if you haven't already?!)

Well, this was a great read!!!! I really enjoyed it!

Thank you,

R
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your stories.I look forward to them every day.
person Roya7777
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh, hell!!! all that powers has transfered to Des!!!!! O.O

Well but it's good that Rav is OK and Julian at that matter!

I'm sooo glad that J killed Magda! she is dead, isn't she?! but she didn't suffer enough! :D (evil grin) I would have done much more to her! :p

BTW, hugs and kisses ^_^ thanks for more updates ^_^ you really made my day!

Well, I guess I'm off my way to read Specter :D

Thanks again ;)
person Dark Lady
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I think you are a wonderful writer. I have read all of your stories in this set and I have to say that I loved them all. I hope that you keep writing and keep posting. However I also think that you should look at on line publishing companies like Dreamspinners press. I would pay to have the three stories in this set and I know that others would pay for them.
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story and fell in love with everyone especially Raven!!!!
Thanks for sharing it.
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am beginning to picture poor Raven in the same limelight as 'the Perils of Pauline', LOL. Raven never has it easy and just when he begins to think things are going smoothly in his live, he goes and gets kidnapped by Magda.
That butler Tobias deserved everything Julien did to him and Magda will get hers..........

I love the guys from Spector's Gamble, it's good to see Desmond and Gabriel make an appearance too, they rock! Way to go Desmond, for saving little Raven.

I am so confused as to why more people arn't reading/reviewing this story, it's awesome and I love it.
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Drum rolls please!!!!!

Desmond opens the door and who's standing on the other side but Julien, whoops, what's going to happen next?

Raven will save the day this time!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I just reviewed a new chapter and then saw more new ones up so off to read them!!!!!