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I am hooked on this story already so please don't delete it. I will keep an eye out for chapter 2 plus new chapter for Bitter Sweet on Friday!!!!

Have a nice evening,

Katie

you got me nervous with your "brutal" comment. : ( and yet i'm still intrigued. I suppose once we discover what life is like with August I'll let you know how i feel ^^;

I was happy to see you had another new story up but will wait till Friday for update to Bitter Sweet!

I am not sure about the brutal part but trust you that this story will prove to be very entertaining and have a happy ending(?) for the boy, I hope.

Please don't delete this new story because I liked first chapter and want to know how it all plays out.

Sounds promising- definitely interested in more updates :)

The first chapter was very interesting so please continue and even though it will be 'brutal' as you say I still
want to read more.

This story is really promising,I like the plot.So please do continue with it.
And,don't take my next words in the wrong way,but you are an author right?You should continue writing and posting even if you have one reader.I understand that you want your stories to be read,but frankly I would continue writing even if no one would read my stories.
Good luck anywayz!

Congrats on another very promising story and one that I think you should continue with along with 'Bitter Sweet'. So, August is like a demon or something, right? What is the boy's name and age? Is his sister older/younger and how did she end up with this demon/monster? I hope it will have a happy ending though for this boy who's name I don't know yet.

I am looking foward to seeing what happens once his last week of freedom is over and becomes the property of this demon guy.

Good job and keep it up,

W.T.

P.S. Update Bitter Sweet along with this one by Friday like you promised, ok?

I would like to know how he finally found his sister after all the years ago that she had disappeared. I want to find out what this man demon plans to do with this kid. Do they have parents? I think the prologue sounds very very very promising so make sure you upload another chapter on Friday and don't you dare delete this or I will haunt your dreams.

I want you to know that I like this new story of yours, maybe not as much as Bitter Sweet, at least yet since you've only written one chapter. I am worried by what this creature has planned for the boy with no name, LOL. I am dieing to find out what his name is. So, the creature's name is August?, interesting name. I am trying to figure out what kind of creature he is, but it demon was mentioned in prologue so that must be what he is. I would like to know what the boy looks like; hair/height/eye color/age.

I will check back Friday for 2nd chapter to this story and also new chapter for Bitter Sweet.

Hugs,

Bella