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Chapter 3 / review

Oh my gosh!!!!

Poor Xander and what a cruel bastard August was for raping him. I liked Xander's attitude it shows he's got spunk and won't take any bull (at least he'll try not to) from August. I knew he would get into trouble for leaving the room but seriously I think August was trying to catch him so he could punish him.

I was happy to see you were able to get to this story too although I also enjoy reading Bitter Sweet.

Thanks for updating this story I like it alot.

Hi there,

It's me again and I just realized you had posted another new chapter. How the heck did I miss this one?!!!

I hope that Xander will be the one who changes this August fellow from being a 'demon' to a caring person.

I don't know much yet about the commander akda August but am worried about what he will do to Xander for leaving the room after he was told to stay.

That can't be good for poor Xander!!!

Sorry, I meant to say new 'story' not new chapter, silly me.

I guess I just got to excited because I love your stories.

I was just getting ready to go out and just checked to see if any of my fav stories were updated since yesterday and just like you promised I found chapter 2 of your new story!!!

I kind of like Mischka, he seems like he will be a good friend to Xander (I hope), and I love Xander's name.

I can already see that Xander is going to be in trouble due to is curiosity (didn't he ever hear that curiosity killed the cat?) taking peeks around the room/opening doors/looking in closet stuff like that instead of sitting and waiting for August (the commander; cool name by the way)like he was supposed to. I wouldn't doubt it if there weren't hidden cameras in the room and August is watching him.

Now, Xander's in very BIG trouble for leaving the room and will probably get lost.

What is Mischka's age and what does he look like?

I am worried now about what kind of punishment Xander might get in next chapter. ** cowers and hides **

Mischka seems like a very interesting character. I don't think Xander realizes yet just how dangerous his situation is and that August aka the Commander means business. I am anxiously waiting for next chapter to find out what happens to Xander and am expecting something bad because he is being nosy and wandered off.

I am off now to read/review new chapter of Bitter Sweet.

Ok, now I am really worried about Xander and I bet August was deliberately staying away because he wants an exuse to punish Xander for disobaying the rule of staying put. I like Mischka and bet he will be the one who takes care of any injuries Xander gets from August.

Mischka seems like a cool guy and I wonder what kind of bad things he has seen that have gone on in the commander's home. Is he like the clean up guy for whatever messes August makes? When he picked up Xander after school, I wonder too if the kid had thought August might have forgotten their deal and would have left him alone. He wasn't able to even pack a bag and bring anything personal from his life with him. Does Xander even releaze what is probably going to be expected from him? Poor kid, I don't envy what kind of torment I am sure August will put him through.

So, Xander will be trained at August's home but then what will happen? Will he send the kid to a brothel or something bad like that or decide to keep him for himself at his house?

I am waiting for chapter 3 to find out if Xander gets caught for wandering away from August's room.

Later,

W.T.

I hope Xander doesn't lose his new cellphone because I think he would get into BIG trouble if he did. I enjoyed the second chapter and how it's leading up to some kind of confrontation with the mysterious August. I really thought he was a demon or something like that, whoops. I guess he could be considered one of the human kind anyway. I am sure poor Xander will soon find out why he is called the commander. He keeps everyone under his control like he's in the military or something. Was Xander's sister his lover or did he just have her trained at his compound/home like he wants to do to Xander, and then used her as a prostitute or something bad like that? I am interested in finding out more details about things. Mischka might prove to be Xander's only ally but I will have to wait and see.

I will check for chapter 3 in about a week then and I really like this story so be sure to keep writing it.

I really don't know what sort of person August will turn out to be but by the title I am thinking maybe Xander will melt August's heart from stone??? I can't wait for August to make his re-appearance and how it will affect Xander.
I am still worried about the upcoming brutal part but hooked on your new story.

I like it! (Plz don't delete)