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for Little Slave

by Aya

schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is Ahta actually Una? His description is very close to Una's, though his actions are a little un-Una like and, at the same time, Una like with the extreme cleansiness, the hat and the cane. I have to wonder if the recently named Ahtat is Durth suffering from memory loss or a spell of some sort, or Ra (Raya). If it's not Ra I am hoping to see him kill his mothers mate. That guy deserves it and so much more.

I love your stories. Partners was the first original fiction I read on aff and it was good enough for me to spend the majority of a weekend reading it. I have read everything you've written since. Thank you for sharing your work.
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schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A very nice start to another little tasty gem. I'm perched on the edge of my seat waiting for more of this one. Please update soon or as time permits. Wonderful story.