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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12. Lou "lil-spy" hahahahahahahahahaha! poor Ra. loved how this chapter ended consider the way that it began. smex smex smex
poor Ra. XD can't wait to read more on what will happen to him. i bet Lou whispered to Tanis that Ra was outside the door in the mist of his fondling.
poor Ra. XD can't wait to read more on what will happen to him. i bet Lou whispered to Tanis that Ra was outside the door in the mist of his fondling.
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June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story, i cant wait for more!!!!
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
0000hhhhh getting interesting!
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11. I love Tanis! I can't wait for you to finish Adaptation so that I can possibly dissect how Tanis finally accepted his new role as.... Game master? *searches memories from previous stories*
i'm jittery with joy! definitely can't wait for the next update and greatly appreciate your updating even though you've been busy. greatly appreciated since i'm egarly awaiting the next update. thanks a bunch and hope to read more soon.
i'm jittery with joy! definitely can't wait for the next update and greatly appreciate your updating even though you've been busy. greatly appreciated since i'm egarly awaiting the next update. thanks a bunch and hope to read more soon.
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May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 9-10. owie for Ra bout the slow torture he went through and owie for Ahtat for being ridden so hard. XD i'd like to read more about this stew that Una and Durth likes so much. thankies for the udpates and i hope to read more from you soon! greatly appreciate the hard work! and thankies for updating Unbelievable!
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May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. It's nice to see Lou and Tanis make an appearance. Can't wait for more of this one. Thanks for another great story.
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May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Are Ra and Basht going to learn of Una's immortality? And some people in your world don't know who or what Sidhe? You got me excited about the next few chapters so update soon please!!
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see Una is not totally without compassion, and didn't want Ra totally beaten and broken.
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this update. This is the most interaction the four main characters have had so far. I'm really curious to see how having Ra in closer quarters with the lord and the master and Athat is going to go. I hope our little slave is able to pull his memories together. Some deeper game is going on, but with the gods, there always is, isn't it? ^_^