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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm still crying as I type this. Wonderful! Aside from the few spelling mistakes, it was wonderful!
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I nearly cried at the end. I'd love for there to be a sequel.
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAAA!!!!! *cry* Very good story!!! that was great!
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAH! I am so sad for Lorenz. I wish he could have taken Damien away and saved his life. I hope we get to see a sequel. This is the first sad story that I have willingly read. Good job.
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAH! I can't bear the thought of Damien dying and being gone forever! I know it would not be fair to turn a child into a vampire but I wish there was some way that they could help him. I want him to hang on till he grows up so he can be with Lorenz forever. My heart is breaking. On another note, Lorenz and Velten naked together in the shower is very interesting. They are very close for brothers. Hmmm.
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August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lorenz is so sweet to Damien, his interaction with Jessika was quite amusing. I can understand how she must feel very worried and protective about Damion, but yet it is so wonderful that he can have a friend who actually wants to spend time with him. His parents have not allowed enough time for him in their lives. If I had a child who was sick I would spend as much time with him as possible, not the occasional visit. The story is very interesting.
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story!! Does the maid have something against the vamp?? What about the older brother? do we get to meet him??
You have done a great job with the story! hope to be able to read more soon!!!
You have done a great job with the story! hope to be able to read more soon!!!
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 1 and I love your story. I just worry that Damion will die in the end and that makes me want to cry my eyes out. I hope lorenz will be able to show him some happiness. What amazes me is how forgiving and cheerful Damion is with his parents when they are so selfish and neglectful. How could they have his sister's party on his birthday? It just shows that they don't include him in their everyday thoughts. Anyway I am on to the next chapters.
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Lorenz has been busted by Jessika. I hope they can get her on their side. Maybe she can help Damion to explain where the puppy came from. The story is very sweet. I am really looking forward to the next update.