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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yayy good thing you made it reviewable by everyone (too lazy to sign in :P)! Anyways I have been following the story and it's really enjoyable and has great tension/interactions b/w the characters :) Thanks also for the quick updates--it really helps the story flow and has greater impact! The chemistry between Noah and Rowan is really palpable and just plain amazing :) Hehehe the last chapter leaves me feeling that Rowan's got more secrets than he lets on? :P And I like the focus on mental health issues too--both sides have a point though I think. If you're going to explore that side more, it'll be interesting to read that. Actually I LOVE the cuddling too! I've always thought it was unfair how straight guys aren't 'allowed' to cuddle as much (although some do hehe) as girls can do and get away with it. Anyways, looking forward to more :)
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter well done. I found your outlook on depression quite intresting, although I don't fully agree with it to give it a name or not doesn't change it's presence, and sometimes u need to put a name to what going on, to know is nt u, that it happens and that you can take something for it that would take u out of ur funk enough to be able to function. That's what I think of depression, although again, it's just an opinion because I haven't actually gone through it. But I saw where u were coming from, and I wasn't offended in anyway, I hasten to add lol.
Love ur story more than ur boyfriends :P although his is quite good too :D don't know why ur not gettin reviewed, this is really really good n I hope this motivates u to write more, because there is a following to this story
xx gg
Love ur story more than ur boyfriends :P although his is quite good too :D don't know why ur not gettin reviewed, this is really really good n I hope this motivates u to write more, because there is a following to this story
xx gg
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Actually I did think the "E" was an error when the chapter uploaded. I've seen it with a few other stories too.
Hey, what's with you and your b/f spelling hott w/two "t"'s? Did they change the spelling in Webster's? hahah, j/k it is spelled with one "t" though.
Awesome chapter, as always! I'm so glad Noah's out of his "funk", although smashing the wall probably wasn't a good thing. Was it his writing hand? His driving hand? His (he he) j/o hand? Oh wait, now he has Rowan for that! lol
So, right at the moment he was thinking how hot w/one "t" Rowan looked biting his lip in between his piercing. (with the i before the e, lol). This would mean lots of things I'm guessing. Maybe Noah was what, asexual before? We never got a glimpse as to where he leans. So now maybe he'll develop a crush on Rowan? And wasn't Rowan taking advantage of Noah? After all, Noah admitted he never let Rowan get that far before. Oh, so Rowan would have went further all those other times? Hmmmm, what does that say about Rowan, I wonder? Was Noah blind to this fact, or he just never really thought about it?
Monotovs, thanks for addressing the cutting issue. I just know a lot of teens and young adults use this method of self-destruction as a way of taking or being in control of their lives. I'm glad Noah never did that.
Great job! I can't wait for the next installment! :) Happy Easter to you and your b/f! :)
Hey, what's with you and your b/f spelling hott w/two "t"'s? Did they change the spelling in Webster's? hahah, j/k it is spelled with one "t" though.
Awesome chapter, as always! I'm so glad Noah's out of his "funk", although smashing the wall probably wasn't a good thing. Was it his writing hand? His driving hand? His (he he) j/o hand? Oh wait, now he has Rowan for that! lol
So, right at the moment he was thinking how hot w/one "t" Rowan looked biting his lip in between his piercing. (with the i before the e, lol). This would mean lots of things I'm guessing. Maybe Noah was what, asexual before? We never got a glimpse as to where he leans. So now maybe he'll develop a crush on Rowan? And wasn't Rowan taking advantage of Noah? After all, Noah admitted he never let Rowan get that far before. Oh, so Rowan would have went further all those other times? Hmmmm, what does that say about Rowan, I wonder? Was Noah blind to this fact, or he just never really thought about it?
Monotovs, thanks for addressing the cutting issue. I just know a lot of teens and young adults use this method of self-destruction as a way of taking or being in control of their lives. I'm glad Noah never did that.
Great job! I can't wait for the next installment! :) Happy Easter to you and your b/f! :)
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you guys ARE in competition! I just finished reading his chapter, and voila! Here's yours! I'm not complaining, mind you! I love both stories equally! :)
Ok, Noah, poor kid. It seems he grew up with such sadness. I can't imagine the psychological damage done to the people left, when someone commits suicide. And it does run in families. And all this death, from family and pets (do not underestimate the effects of losing a pet; it can be devastating) all in a span of three years. Wow.
I'm not sure if I agree w/Noah on the meds issue. I think if his brother is depressed, or really, really sad, as Noah would like to think (maybe he's in denial? Noah, not his brother), Cameron may need meds. What's wrong with taking meds in conjunction to going to therapy? Sometimes therapy along doesn't cut it. Nothing wrong with having a little outside help.
How old is Brinley? Cool name, btw. Irish? Does she go for therapy? Sounds like the whole family could use some good counseling.
Good chapter, even if it's depressing. I hope Noah doesn't start cutting b/c he's aware that hurting himself makes him feel better. I would hate to think that he thinks he can't control his life b/c his mother, sister, brother, etc. is controlling him and wanting him to fix everything that's wrong with their lives. I would hate to see him start hurting himself b/c he thinks it's the only control he does have in his life.
Ok, enough of Pysch 101.
Oh, I did notice a typo: dieing should be dying.
Looking forward to the next one; let's see, will it be Max, or will it be New? Hmmmmm, toss a coin.....:)
Ok, Noah, poor kid. It seems he grew up with such sadness. I can't imagine the psychological damage done to the people left, when someone commits suicide. And it does run in families. And all this death, from family and pets (do not underestimate the effects of losing a pet; it can be devastating) all in a span of three years. Wow.
I'm not sure if I agree w/Noah on the meds issue. I think if his brother is depressed, or really, really sad, as Noah would like to think (maybe he's in denial? Noah, not his brother), Cameron may need meds. What's wrong with taking meds in conjunction to going to therapy? Sometimes therapy along doesn't cut it. Nothing wrong with having a little outside help.
How old is Brinley? Cool name, btw. Irish? Does she go for therapy? Sounds like the whole family could use some good counseling.
Good chapter, even if it's depressing. I hope Noah doesn't start cutting b/c he's aware that hurting himself makes him feel better. I would hate to think that he thinks he can't control his life b/c his mother, sister, brother, etc. is controlling him and wanting him to fix everything that's wrong with their lives. I would hate to see him start hurting himself b/c he thinks it's the only control he does have in his life.
Ok, enough of Pysch 101.
Oh, I did notice a typo: dieing should be dying.
Looking forward to the next one; let's see, will it be Max, or will it be New? Hmmmmm, toss a coin.....:)
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I bet you got lots going on! You and your b/f are in competition to see who's gonna update next! lol
Cute chapter! Rowan is just so adorable I wanna pinch his cheeks! lol It's amazing to meet someone who is older than a child, who has that much energy and enthusiasm for life. It really must be contagious.
So, you're very good at being so discreet about Noah; we still don't know which way he swings. Did he ever deny anything to Rowan? Especially w/Rowan's list?
Anyway....study hard to you can update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Awesome job! ;)
Cute chapter! Rowan is just so adorable I wanna pinch his cheeks! lol It's amazing to meet someone who is older than a child, who has that much energy and enthusiasm for life. It really must be contagious.
So, you're very good at being so discreet about Noah; we still don't know which way he swings. Did he ever deny anything to Rowan? Especially w/Rowan's list?
Anyway....study hard to you can update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Awesome job! ;)
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm currantly obsessed with ur story, I love it, seeing an update makes me sqeal, Im passed the age of squealing but a good story does that to me. Carry on being fab, I love Noah and his obliviousness. Can't wait for the new update :)
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love love love love love love love.
Noah seems so sexy. I love that he can just pick Rowan up like that. And that he runs. And that he's tan and that he's an artist. He's hott!
I really like the way you're allowing for the development of Rowan's character through Noah's eyes, they're so perfectly opposite. Usually when people write about opposites it's something super cliche like an evil, sadistic asshole and some overly angelic genius who is painfully innocent, or like one character will be really feminine and basically a girl with a dick while the other will be a macho man. I like how Rowan and Noah are both really guys. Like all real guys they have parts of them that are feminine but don't walk around crying.
Basically, this is a long winded way for me to say that I love your characters and how they are real and how they interact. It's really cool to see such opposite characters that don't fall in to the trap of being lame and cliche.
Keep up the amazing work and please post soon! I look forward to reading more!
Noah seems so sexy. I love that he can just pick Rowan up like that. And that he runs. And that he's tan and that he's an artist. He's hott!
I really like the way you're allowing for the development of Rowan's character through Noah's eyes, they're so perfectly opposite. Usually when people write about opposites it's something super cliche like an evil, sadistic asshole and some overly angelic genius who is painfully innocent, or like one character will be really feminine and basically a girl with a dick while the other will be a macho man. I like how Rowan and Noah are both really guys. Like all real guys they have parts of them that are feminine but don't walk around crying.
Basically, this is a long winded way for me to say that I love your characters and how they are real and how they interact. It's really cool to see such opposite characters that don't fall in to the trap of being lame and cliche.
Keep up the amazing work and please post soon! I look forward to reading more!
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Is Rowan clueless or does he just like torturing Noah?
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, riiigghhhttt, he's not gay! lol DIVA bright pink undies, singing to BRITNEY! hahah
Now that Maddie planted that little seed of doubt in Noah's mind, he's gonna be thinking about that all the time now. Interesting tho: we still don't know about Noah!
Great chapter; I'm really loving this story!
I did notice one typo tho: dies his hair should be dyes his hair. Other than that: perfect! :)
Now that Maddie planted that little seed of doubt in Noah's mind, he's gonna be thinking about that all the time now. Interesting tho: we still don't know about Noah!
Great chapter; I'm really loving this story!
I did notice one typo tho: dies his hair should be dyes his hair. Other than that: perfect! :)
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, he had a crush on her crayons; it was a cool 100 pack. Noah's too funny!
And wtf is a dill pickle pringle? Pringles now makes a dill pickle flavor in a potato chip? Gross....
So Rowan actually sounds like a five year old hyped up on too much sugar. lol And he even met Tonya's parents, but broke up with her right after. Hmmmm too many short-term relationships for Rowan. He's breaking hearts all over campus! hahha
I actually know straight boys who love to cuddle like Noah and Rowan. Believe it or not! lol
Still not too sure about Noah. So he's sitting and talking to an attractive, intelligent girl, but would rather play a board game with her than make out with her. Hmmmm, sounds fishy......He did mention that he's not totally asexual; he does get turned on. But he failed to mention what turns him on....
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :)
And wtf is a dill pickle pringle? Pringles now makes a dill pickle flavor in a potato chip? Gross....
So Rowan actually sounds like a five year old hyped up on too much sugar. lol And he even met Tonya's parents, but broke up with her right after. Hmmmm too many short-term relationships for Rowan. He's breaking hearts all over campus! hahha
I actually know straight boys who love to cuddle like Noah and Rowan. Believe it or not! lol
Still not too sure about Noah. So he's sitting and talking to an attractive, intelligent girl, but would rather play a board game with her than make out with her. Hmmmm, sounds fishy......He did mention that he's not totally asexual; he does get turned on. But he failed to mention what turns him on....
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :)