rate_review Reviews

I love the cynicism; very funny.

Whoop! you did a great job! damn i thought there were more chapters! :O can't wait for your next update! Finally a interesting, well written and new story to read! its a miracle!!! <3

this is really really good start! love the little guy! though i'm thinking that he should fall out of love with bradly as soon as possible :) not i can't wait till the villain shows up, cuz i'm always rooting for the seme ;) either way good work so far and can't wait for the next chapter :)

haaha. thats life for ya.

hmmm... how do I say this? I think you need to give your work far more credit. That was so not boring, nor did it suck in any way.

If this is your first attempt at first person, it was very good, in fact : ). I like nothing better than to get into the mind of a character, and you did it very well. I especially llke the main characters sarcastic personality. Sidekicks sound like that have it tough, lol.

Anyway, I will most definately keep track of this story (I really wish AFF had alerts! haha). Looking forward to more chapters.