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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fun, Funny, and Fabulous...Your writing is very interesting and most amusing...and I didn't skip a word, which is the kind of literature I always seek... not even the pros always succeed with that success and I end up glossing over useless babble. Please write more soon. G
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
-snickers- I feel so sorry for him! Having to wear spandex in bright colors would just kill me!
Great start to the story though! Can't wait for the next one.
Great start to the story though! Can't wait for the next one.
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! I love it!! I can't wait to read more, please update again soon and frequently! >D
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this alot so far. Keep up the good work I think this has tons of potential.
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say how awesome the idea for this story is? I can't believe no one has thought of anything like this yet! XD So excited! I love it already. Next chapter, please? ;)
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha this looks like itll be pretty good xD
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, really if this is your first time writing in 1st person, I cannot wait to see what your 3rd person view story goes. Creative plot, first story like this that I have read. Love it, great details. Cannot wait for the second chapter. Keep up the good work.
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this - looks like it will be a really refreshing plot! Looking forward to the next chapter already!
btw if you like the superhero villain comedy thing you've got going on here (like I do!) you should try reading 'Suerboy and the evil genius' by 'momsdarksecret' on fictionpress.com. This fic just really reminded me of it!
btw if you like the superhero villain comedy thing you've got going on here (like I do!) you should try reading 'Suerboy and the evil genius' by 'momsdarksecret' on fictionpress.com. This fic just really reminded me of it!
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like. I really do :)
I look forward to see where you take this :D
I look forward to see where you take this :D
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You did awesome on the first chapter please post some more I cant wait to see what happens next ^^