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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the start your going with it reminds me of the Tick(animation). I loved that show.
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You definitely rock!! Loved the costume description- poor guy. What love can do to a person :)
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
On your recs, you spelled the author "Mahsa" wrong. Update soon
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
BTW, Your writing is really good. There were some mistakes, but only a little. I'm sure me and all others wanna see who this arch nemesis is!! Please update soon! Ill be waiting.
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting! Can't wait to read more. Very well written. ^_^
I'd love to see where it goes.
I'd love to see where it goes.
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i approve of this SO HARD. SO HARD! :D your writing is beautiful~
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can already tell this is going to be a thrill to read! I love his sarcasm! Can't wait for more.~
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter) you have a good sense of humour. I absolutely love the idea. Really hope you see it through!
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm not the greatest critic in the world..
But I thought it was a great start!
It was clear and easy to follow...which is REALLY appreciated on here.
I love how "Wonder Lad"'s so sarcastic.
You wouldn't expect that from a sidekick...
But then, he's pissed off and fed up, so it's not too unbelievable.
I wish you luck with the story and hope you update soon!
But I thought it was a great start!
It was clear and easy to follow...which is REALLY appreciated on here.
I love how "Wonder Lad"'s so sarcastic.
You wouldn't expect that from a sidekick...
But then, he's pissed off and fed up, so it's not too unbelievable.
I wish you luck with the story and hope you update soon!
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was super cute. I can tell you're new to writing (At least this style, perhaps?) but its also quite obvious you have a lot of talent and are gonna be AWESOME with a little more practice... On to the story!
Super adorable plot. I love the sarcastic tones, it really made me laugh. The plot is good and I can't wait to read more! Update soon, yah?
Super adorable plot. I love the sarcastic tones, it really made me laugh. The plot is good and I can't wait to read more! Update soon, yah?