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You rock! So much! I've never read a superhero fiction on this site, so thank you for writing one :)
and the spandex. Oooh yessshh the spandex!
Update soon, i'm craving for more Wonder Lad and his Wonderful spandex pants :D

Yay another update at last! Thanks for the nice chappie! First thing I GOTTA point out is you're not allowed to do review replies in your chapters! If you don't take them off this chapter, the moderators will probly give you a warning or something. But yea, you're breaking the rules. I believe in a chappie of Mahsa's 'Matthew", she said review replies in the actual chappies cannot exceed the 600 word limit! I suggest using the Forums to do review replies or even something separate from here like Livejournal if you want to keep doing them! Anyway, so we got to learn about the Panda Express. And meet Kim Kim. She kinda reminds me of me actually since I am Asian, and under five feet tall too (I think)! Man, I feel bad you're embarrassing him with his spandex costumes! It is funny though. Also, I laughed out loud at certain points when reading this so you should be proud of yourself xD You're doing great at first person, and hopefully I can write as well as you if I decide to write in first person if I decide to write. There were some mistakes but too lazy to point them out so sorry. Well, I cant form a REAL full opinion about the Red Phantom since we onlu heard bout him which kinda sucked. But its a relief finally meeting him in the next chappie! I wonder how he'll react to Wonder Lad's costume! That will be amusing! Update asap!!

I feel like pointing out other similarities between me and Kim Kim! LOL, anyway we are both first generations! I also don't have small eyes like the stereotype. My eyes are really slanted though. Someone even said I don't even look Asian, that I look American even. My feet are tiny 2! LOL Sorry if annoying you. xD

I meant "My eyes are NOT really slanted though..."

I'm sure the Red Phantom will love his "neon colored, spandex, one-piece complete with sleeveless V-neck and booty shorts" Sounds SEXY from a bad guy's prospective. This is a great plot bunny you have hopping here! Happens to be a fantasy of mine~ Please keep the chapters rolling!!

Haha, yes! You have captured the woes of v-necks and booty shorts perfectly. Love this.

Okay. I just KNEW we would be hearing of the bad guy in this chapter and was oh-so-happy to read about him! X3 He sounds tough. Is it too early to assume he'll be like all the goofy villains in movies and cartoons? idk. I can't wait to read a scene with him and Wonder Lad. Great chapter!! Keep it up! <3

Ohmigod, I simply love this. XD Not only something I've never actually seen on AFF, but hilarious to boot, and it's only the second chapter! Eagerly awaiting chapter three! Keep up the fantastic work!

ok! i absolutly love this! this story puts me in mind of the movie skyhigh only post highschool with sex thrown in

I'm liking this so far! I love his snarky inner monologue and I'm looking forward to meeting the villain. I'm a huge fan of superhero stories.