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May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i personally find the pacing of this story to be just perfect. You get to know the characters really well :)
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loooove it :D Can´t wait for the next chapter :D :D
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hahhaha, awesome, i can't wait for the next chapter when the red phantom sees his booty shorts. hehehe i wonder what his reaction will be towards it. either way, short but good chapter. I hope that the next one will be longer :)
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
BAHAHA. this totally embarrasses me...
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i fucking love this story!!!! its sooo awesome!!! u need more!!!!
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it!
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mahsa's "Matthew" is spelled with two "t's". You have "Mathew" which is incorrect. xD
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another very funny chapter, and I have a feeling this sidekick gig is going to get even tougher. Especially when poor sidekicks are forced to wear ugly spandex suits, haha.
Apart from that, the introduction of Kim-kim was pretty interesting, I love her sarcastic personality, but I'm particularly interested in finding what kind of personality this 'red phantom' had, he sounds very interesting.
Just a suggestion as well from your A/N notes, if your interested in replying to reviewers, maybe it's worth setting up a livejournal so people can go to read it. I notice some authors are doing this because of the restrictions placed on A/N notes on AFF.
Again, funny chapter and looking forward to the next one.
Apart from that, the introduction of Kim-kim was pretty interesting, I love her sarcastic personality, but I'm particularly interested in finding what kind of personality this 'red phantom' had, he sounds very interesting.
Just a suggestion as well from your A/N notes, if your interested in replying to reviewers, maybe it's worth setting up a livejournal so people can go to read it. I notice some authors are doing this because of the restrictions placed on A/N notes on AFF.
Again, funny chapter and looking forward to the next one.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is just awesome!
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh God my side hurts so much from laughing!! XD
Thank you so much for the neon colored, spandex, one-piece with sleeveless V-neck and booty shorts!!!
Thank you so much for the neon colored, spandex, one-piece with sleeveless V-neck and booty shorts!!!