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for Just Super

by NeonGreenGummieBears

schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really disliking Captain Infallible right about now. Poor Jacob. -snickers- I'm liking Red Phantom though, he seems pretty sexy. I like the super villains over the superheroes, probably because I like to see the annoying heroes taken down a peg or several pegs. =P
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It sucks that Captain I is such an ass, Jacob doesn't deserve that :( Anyway, I love your writing style and I hope you update soon! <3
person Alex
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really want to see Wonder Lad (can't remember his actual name) stick it to Captain Infallible, maybe even develop some real cool super power of his own and just kick his ass for the fag comment, before he goes with Red Phantom. It would also be cool if after this last chapter it came out that Captain Infallible actually wanted Wonder Lad, but because he has to keep his image he hasn't, and WL doesn't give him the time of day.
person Arbitrary Doom
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
......great job on this its really interesting......though Captain Infallible seems to have some serious issues regarding his sexuality that he should probably work out :) .....
person BijouDuMon
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! XD An update! And we finally met the Red Phantom! I love him already. Can't wait for the next update. ;)
person sad yo
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He needs a hug and to find someway to quit.
person fluffiebunny
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! an update!!!
Aw man, captain infallible just had to be a homophobe >:I
oh well, that just makes this story more interesting >:D
person oo
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i cant read a single sentence with out cracking up, till the end there where it got pretty emotional... god, what an ass! why doesnt jake drop captain infallibles ass like a hot potatoe? i really want jake to stand up for himself and say fuck you to him.
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
winces... damn, sucks to be him. Heh, maybe that phantom dude can get him out of the contract. ^^
person John
schedule May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am obsessed. I love your writing style, and your inner voice! I cant wait to read more!