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October 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. If you're still active please finish this story! I have to know what happens, Please?!!
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June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot so far. In ideas 4 u 4 changes n ch. 3, u could possibly describe things n more detail, ie the scenery around the battle, & u could add more dialogue nthe actual fight scene btween cap & red. Another idea is u could switch POV, like red phantom's, or 3rd person, so u could add detail not otherwise possible from Jake's viewpoint :-) hope i helpt. Plz update soon
Rukia
Rukia
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful! any chance of it continuing?
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May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I agree with the previous reviewer and was wondering why don't you just delete this story since it's been about one year to the date since you even posted a new chapter. It's really not fair to people who were reading and reviewing it to leave them hanging this way. You were a lucky writer to recieve such fantastic reviews/ratings but I guess that doesn't seem to matter. It would be nice for you to at least leave a message on your author panel for everyone and I am sure they would understand. I think you owe it to us to at least give a reason why you have seemingly discontinued/abandoned this entertaining story. Don't you? I am sure people would understand, I know I would. I don't mean to appear rude or anything but seriously this waiting game is a very cruel and harsh punishment.
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April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dear NeonGreenGummieBears,
Please finish this story up. Some people are really interested and would like to read more. Its kinda mean to leave people high and dry.
Thank you very much,
Sincerely a fan
Please finish this story up. Some people are really interested and would like to read more. Its kinda mean to leave people high and dry.
Thank you very much,
Sincerely a fan
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Late rew is late. A super hero story, delightful.
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November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please write more? I keep checking on this story because I can't wait to read more. I hope you do! :D It's cute. And I'm curious about the villain and his interests...
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D: Are you gonna update this story? It has such awesome potential!
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon! The wait is killing me! :'( I miss this story...
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July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fucking loved it, more please.