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for Bound

by Karategirl422

schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay update. And yes.. I am a bigger fan of the demon pairing.. She would have to choose to stay with him willingly, but I think she's too stubborn for that. It would still be awesome. Update soon!
person schmozle
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe-inspiring dynamics b/w Harley and Slaiden! I'm greatly enjoying how 'callous' Slaiden is when concerning Harley! What can I say? I GREATLY enjoy angst in stories, especially when I'm fond of both characters, which I am! I'm unsure of what direction you're going to take the story in, and I'm a little worried... Gavin... IMHO is/was a stooge... I just didn't/don't 'FEEL' as if anything substantial/monumental would/will occur b/w the heroine and the detective... I'm ALL for Harley/Slaiden... until the end...

- let there be conflict aplenty however though b/w them! For it makes for a delicious piece!

I'm REALLY REALLY looking forward to the next chapters! Update when you can!
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SQUEAL!!!!!!!! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!!!!!!!!! Update NNNOOOWWWWW!!!!!!
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You really are a fantastic writer! Your stories (Summoned & Bound) are always capable of sweeping me away to another world. I can't wait for chapter three to come out! Take care!
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG
so happy you decided to do a continuation
evil cliff hanger!
can wait for an update
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!! Damn I hate cliff hangers! Evil Evil.... Loving the sequel so far though. Very amazing. I can't wait to read the update.
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter soon please. awesome story by the way!
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are a fantastic writer. I'm really anticipating this sequel as it seems it has more of a political/adventure spin to it which I really enjoy. I do have one small nit-pick to make, and please do not take it too harshly, like I said, you are one of the best writers of het fantasy on this site. Author notes within the story are a huge mood-kill for me, they take me out of the world you've written so well and it would be great if you could put them at the bottom with your other notes.

Looking forward to the next chapter!