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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
... eventful... that's one way to put it. Still, this chappie was great. Looks like Halley girl has picked up an ally or two, maybe.
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, can't help but love Janner. Can see those two getting into a bit of mischief later on, lol.
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October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah damn, it's going to be so easy for her to lose herself.
anyway, ty for the update and hot semi reluctant lemons.
anyway, ty for the update and hot semi reluctant lemons.
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October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fantastic story. Love it. You're a great writer. I understand completely the long absence. Hey, people have lives. I am a fellow writer as well. It can become difficult to even get a chance to write and/or post a new chapter, especially when other things have your attention and motivation. Mother of two kids, I know all about that. Post in your own time. I've got your back, hon. Again, fabulous story. <3 Learia
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I love the sequel (and I'm glad you have decided to make one)! I can't wait for you to upload the next chapter (I hope it's soon) :)
I love the sequel (and I'm glad you have decided to make one)! I can't wait for you to upload the next chapter (I hope it's soon) :)
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The only bloody thing I don't get while reading your stories is what the hell are you doing here?!!!
I mean you could have gotten this story published and earn money from that. I am glad, happy even I can read it this freely, but I don't get you!!!
And as the afterthought - we all know that there are things getting published daily that are so horrible and they still earn money. Yours is good and you still are here.
As I see it - all the pov's taken out form text and has nice subtitles with 'Harley' or whoever is at the center of the section and all comments in brackets get footnote, but thoughts get just italics! And to make my reading easier I usually put stories in word and read from my phone - I can tell you that length is appropriate to a normal book I usually pay 10-20$ for!
In conclusion I have to say - I hope you publish something :)
I mean you could have gotten this story published and earn money from that. I am glad, happy even I can read it this freely, but I don't get you!!!
And as the afterthought - we all know that there are things getting published daily that are so horrible and they still earn money. Yours is good and you still are here.
As I see it - all the pov's taken out form text and has nice subtitles with 'Harley' or whoever is at the center of the section and all comments in brackets get footnote, but thoughts get just italics! And to make my reading easier I usually put stories in word and read from my phone - I can tell you that length is appropriate to a normal book I usually pay 10-20$ for!
In conclusion I have to say - I hope you publish something :)
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey! great story you have here. i just spent the day reading the first story and it's sequel. i hope it's not too late to cast my vote but i hope sla/har ends up together. he just sounds too delicious for her not to end up with him. until next time :)
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it was well writen so kudos... i hope she doesn't bring similsr 'breaking' behaviour down on her. Still next time theres going to be lemons yes?n time to pay the piper and all.
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May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
its an intersting plot line with very intersting charicters, i hope to see it updated soon.
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
we accept any and all up dates you care to give as you can give them. No complaints here.