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Glad for another chapter, looking forward to the next :)

At first, I wasn't going to try to read this story because I was afraid it was going to mostly be about female slash but I'm glad I did click on this story since I like it so far :)

Hi,

I really enjoyed the first chapter and it explained everything very well about what is going on so I am not
confused.

I hope Jacobson and D'Hare survive and are not killed by the Jusagis!!! It was rather gruesome how the Jusagis' were
killing the soldiers and everything so I hope they don't pull any body part off of Jacobson or D'Hare especially
if they get captured but I don't think they take prisoners to keep alive maybe only to torture.

I would like to keep an eye out for new chapters so often will you be updating? I will also mention that I noticed
you have only allowed signed in reviews to story but you might get more reviews by allowing all reviewers to let you know what they think of your story.

I like it and the cliffhanger leaves me waiting to find out how they will make it out alive.

Very well written and suspenseful with even some comedy relief and keep it up.

Very interesting story!! Reminds me of Starship Troopers with a twist.

It should be interesting to see what happens to these two and since it's xeno, quite literally ANYTHING could happen!