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I' m so glad you updated I love your story

I love that the king was practically sulking over not getting any willing nookie. <_< It kinda shows that, while I doubt he would have any hesitations over killing those two if needed, he certainly doesn't want that need to arise to.

I-i-is it bad that I just happen to ADORE the king? He's definitely deliciously evil! And omfg I looove the Brain. He's so cute ;D
D'Hare is just...LOL. (But, you know, I'm shipping King&D'Hare.)

*runs away*

Jacobson is also LOL Keep experimenting on D'Hare!! As long as you produce good results, oho ;3

And I wonder why Emil turned out the way he did? ;O he's so different from Jacobson.

I'm enjoying the story. I feel your writing is improving with each chapter and I definitely feel empathy for the main characters. I do rather enjoy the king in a naughty way even with all of the awful things he does though. ;)

this story is a jewel.I can't wait to read more:D I wonder about Jacobs son, and what role wil Jacobs and D'Hare ahave in it?Will the fall fr each other or what'

YAY! thanks alot for the great update!

I can't wait to see what will happen next! and what exactly does the king want with the humans? I can't wait to know!

I find this Story quite great. I love the characters, and I mostly love the aliens you created. It shows much originality in your part. King is kind of a bitch, though, and I feel a bit bad for the guys. The twins are lovely, and I love that they pretty much complete each other, but in a fitting way.
I like your story very much, and will await for further progress.

And I hope that something bad will happen to David. And painful, too.

i'm loving how your story is progressing so far. if your willing to go over and read your story again, it would be good to fix the mistakes that i've seen.

probably chapter 5 towards the end, you mentioned Douglass instead of Weston when D'Hare and Jacobson? cleaned him up at the bath. maybe chapter 1 or 2 there was an unfinished sentence. otherwise, i'm definitely looking forward for more updates. greatly appreciate your hard work, and know that i'm anticipating more great work from you.

Interesting story even though I'm unsure where it's leading! You have a collection of alien 'bug' races in war against humanity... what was the purpose of D'Hare, Weston, and Jacobson being singled out and saved? Was it something physical or psychological the bugs saw with them that they were chosen to be pets to the king? I think it's also fascinating that each of them (not sure about Weston) has some alien companion who is always with them (D'Hare=Brain and Jacobson=Hythox). I think what holds my draw the most is why the king is having sex with them. It doesn't seem to be driven by any lust, need, or desire... more like a task that needs to be done. The scenarios I've though of are they're being impregnated, the transfer of fluids are changing them, studying them under emotional/physical pressures, or somehow indoctorinating them with eventual plans of letting them go. I'm guessing whatever is going on, Weston is the first.

Please continue!

I really like your story!
It's sooo awesome! I love it!

I think you deserve your chocolate cookie!!

Ps: and I'm pretty sure that you would have more reviews if your story would be unlocked, 'cause we have to logging to review...just letting you know!