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by RiskaIke

schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is fantastic! I read it all in the last two days. If the King wanted D'Hare and Jacobson so badly why did he send Jacobson and the Red Hythox on to the capital? Not that I think any of them are safer there. It will make things better for Weston, Alita, Bridgette, Juliana and Megan for Emil is a loose cannon without Jacobson. Can't wait till the next chapter. Thank you, starchilds
person lunayolly
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It just keeps interesting and more interesting with each chapter. Please keep up the very good work! I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next! Please update soon! XD
person poppyhigh
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! It's really great to see this story update and you made me want to what will happen next. King is so attached to D'hare and need to know about our medic's future. AHHHHHHHHHH >o< next chapter PLEASE!!!!!!!! Always supporting you. Till next time
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great
person Roriette
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
W-w-was this a double update?? Wootwoot I got to read two chappies ;) D'Hare sacrificed himself D; but did he really think he could escape from the King? Pfft of course not! Over his dead body. I like how the King could harass him even in his dreams ;3 see this D'King ship is sailingggggg~ author-San knows me best. It's so ironic that he has to watch the destruction while getting it in...I should feel bad for D'Hare but I just don't ~ Keep the updates coming my love ;3
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so much! When I only started to read, I was a little bit confused by your unique world and I feared that I can't understand (english is not my mother tongue). But then I proceeded to thevsecond chapter, to the third... and everything was so clear! I like your writing style, ideal blend of descriptions and emotions. So very lively and vivid! It took me in the story entirely, and I worried for all heroes, even shed a tear or two when Red Hythox saved children :-)
It's good that hybrid twins found their pairs, they are really nice girls, both of them, and they deserve to love and to be loved. Emil, however, causes different emotions. On one hand, firstly he seems to be totally keen on gaining absolute domination and control. On the other hand, in late chapters he is so fond of his father, so protective about him that it cannot be ignored. He no longer seems like power-thirsty freak. It will be interesting to discover Emil's nature further.
It's very late now (or early morning for those who slept), around 6 a.m., so I am not able to collect my thoughts on heroes right now. But I wished I could! Sorry :-) I'll do it another time.

So, thank you very much for your writing, I love this fic. And I'm eagerly waiting for more!
person Nivell
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, the Red Hythox is alive!!
person Roriette
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Of course I would ~ author-san is very good at this science fiction. It's totally believable to me ;)
I was surprised by Jacobson's outburst, and D'Hare's like ohdamn. Lol Emir was the calm one there.
Weee I can't wait. Only thing is, good or bad encounters? Good as in favorable (to me) or unfavorable (to me)? Hohoho~
Lulz at hybrids getting busted for getting it on hehh
person Roriette
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Zomg I finally caught up with this. I couldn't remember the title D; but now I do, and I'll be setting tent here until you update.
Anyway, so many things happened. D'Hare and Jacobson meet their offsprings &heart and Emil is so protective of his dad, it's so cute. Since he's always plotting world dom and controlling his army, it's nice to see him be sincere and kid-like. What's a fly? LOL
Is it me or does the King seem to like humiliating Jacobson? I feel bad for him 8D
Wahh I'm still on my King Hare ship. And not giving up anytime soon. Despite D'Hare shooting Mr. Devilishlysmexy.
person Nivell
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Did D'hare leave without the brain? Aww, I liked the brain and the Red Hythox. I was quite sad that the Red Hythox didn't survive after he saved the babies.