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I can't believe Jacobson took off by himself, Emil is going to go ballistic. D'Hare would be happy to know the girl survived. NO! NO! It can't be D'Hare. Jacobson will die if D'Hare is gone. Looking forward to the next chapter(cliff hangers are exciting but evil). thanks, starchilds

I'm actually an aromantic asexual, so the majority of fiction is outside my comfort zone. haha This story seems to be off in its own little region though, since I'm not sure I've ever read anything like it. From the content codes, I thought it would be shallow, but I really can never predict what will happen at all. It's quite enjoyable. :) I wonder if this can even be considered naughty for me? I'm kind of... lacking in that emotional area. haha

I really like Emil; he's such a good kid. I always feel bad for him when he gets left behind by his father. I like(d) D'Hare a lot too, so I'd be a bit sad if he is dead. I could believe the king would do it though, since I still don't understand his alien logic. D'Hare has been annoying me a bit though, with his smack talk(?) during sex. I know that it's very in his character to swear, but in the last two chapters, when the king gives instead of takes, D'Hare switches from general to sexual maledictions. Why the complete flip? Maybe it's a nuance I don't get, but it just seems like insulting someone's cooking and still eating their food.

There were some parts I couldn't understand. I'm not sure if there were because of the wording or just typos, though. Here's one: "The King weak had become weak [...]." What does this mean?

I feel like this has been a negative review, but I don't mean for it to be! I'm very excited that this chapter came so quickly, and I'm eager to see what happens next! Thank you again for writing. :D

OMG!!! I just read this story again last night and when I refreshed new chapter is pop up >_<, I really love D'Hare too much and right now want to what's gonna happen next. What's King plan? OH...So excited.

Always support you...till next time.

OMG!!!!! Not D'Hare!!!!! I just shed a tear but I'm still glad to see another chapter is up. Can't wait for the next one.

That was an evil spot to end the chapter at! I hope you do manage to update next weekend after that cliffhanger! I really don't think the King killed D'Hare though because he enjoys messing with him too much. I'm gonna guess the King somehow gave him a Xiphod body similar to his own, since that would make it hard for D'Hare to ever leave him and go back to the humans, but I'm probably way off. I have to admit, as evil as the King is, I love him and D'Hare together, that's probably my favorite pairing of this story.

..... Oh, I hope the corpse isn't D'Hare. I have to say that he is absolutely my favorite character. Good work on the chapter and I look forward to the next. hopefully real life leave you alone long enough to get it out :P

This is something I'm checking like ... every other day lol

I swear Emil is the cutest thing.
Ever.
The way he worships Jacobson just makes me go *o*
I'm just wondering why the King let him go? For any reason at all? I find it hard to believe that he'd just let Jacobson roam free without any reason ;O Cause he's not that good-hearted...

STILL SAILING MY KINGD'HARE SHIP ALL AROUND THE WORLD BBY. Makes my heart go doki-doki~

I feel a bit wrong for liking something with so many unsavory warnings, but this is actually super interesting to read. I really liked the way you did the parasitic eggs bit, and the world and aliens are generally fun to read about. I can't quite shake the image of Zergs in my head though. haha Sometimes motivations aren't clear to me, but I'm not sure if that's just me. In any case, I like this; thanks for writing. :)

Wait, the Hythox is a girl? Always thought it was a male alien or genderless. Hm...

Nice to see an update, even if it were a millennium years wait. Lol
I....really like this chapter. Ohuehuehue~ you can guess why. Don't need me to elaborate on that right? Kufufufu~
Oh my there's some beastiality going on. I mean, a more obvious beastiality. I don't dislike ;)
I like my King D'Hare. Lots.
I just feel really bad for Emil. :o like he basically lost his father and he can't take his anger out on anyone .___.
Omg please update mooooooarr I need this T^T