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March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read this when it first came out and it is still my most remembered story here. I actually thought it was deleted but apparently I was looking in the wrong subcategory. Emil is so precious but I am worried about jacobson's fate after reading the last chapter's A/N. Not gonna lie i was horrifically surprised by D'hare lol i was like no...but you have managed to make me feel a whirlwind of emotions. You are a fantastic writer and I will now look forward to an update.
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*wiggles around excitedly* So ... is the next chapter going to have the battle .... slaughter? Cause unless the humans come up with something brilliant, that's probably what it's gonna be, a slaughter. I think you did well with portraying the building of stress before a big battle, as well as weaving in people's life. Definitely loved the visit to the graves. And Emil is adorable.
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December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, Jacobson~ no~ don't do it~
And um ... did you mean that he'd put the gun in his Mouth? cause you put mouse instead, and I spent a full minute or so going 'wtf? what mouse?' and then trying to find where the heck a mouse had come in lol. Marvelous as always.
And um ... did you mean that he'd put the gun in his Mouth? cause you put mouse instead, and I spent a full minute or so going 'wtf? what mouse?' and then trying to find where the heck a mouse had come in lol. Marvelous as always.
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November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When I read the first chapter, I didn't feel like liking this story too much but I always give a chance to everything I read. So, I continued to the second chapter and before the end I was like wow, this is so cool. I always liked the alien/human pairing and mpreg is what I like to read lately. This fiction have everything I like.
Thank you for the good work.
Thank you for the good work.
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't say that I blame Jacobson at this point for wanting to end it all. He can't even look forward to sex or companionship. I was hoping that he would turn to Dehare and realize that he lusted only for the one man who had been by his side for the past 20 years , or how ever long since they met. I really want to see them together romantically.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And so it continues. The capitol is doomed. Doomed I say >.> Would have reviewed earlier, but I was out of town and away from internet for the passed week.
Loved the chapter, though I did notice a couple of misspelled/misplaced words.
Loved the chapter, though I did notice a couple of misspelled/misplaced words.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Me encanta Emil y soy muy celosa para entregarlo a cualquiera y ese par no me agrada
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol at the sergeant and private. Oh my, Jacobson sure got guts for escaping from the King :O but I'm glad that he did. Don't want him to end up like D'Hare over there. Well now the King has a reason to kill Jacobson...D;
Eek! Love triangle! I root for Richman x Emil!!! Gogogo Richy! *waves flag*
Speech wut? Omg that's hilarious. I want to try it out. Imagine the program reading me those naughty naughty stories...kekeke
Eek! Love triangle! I root for Richman x Emil!!! Gogogo Richy! *waves flag*
Speech wut? Omg that's hilarious. I want to try it out. Imagine the program reading me those naughty naughty stories...kekeke
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July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! King is so cruel....D'Hare was so pity. T^T can't wait till next time.
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July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not much happened in this chapter, but that's okay. It seems more like a transitional chapter. Quick moment of the king, which was interesting ... *shakes head* Anyway ... I did notice that you seemed to miss a couple of words in sentences. Never much, just one of the small words like 'the'. It's something to look for when you edit.
I enjoyed the chapter, and I definitely understand life's little problems. They get annoying. Thanks for the update ^_^
I enjoyed the chapter, and I definitely understand life's little problems. They get annoying. Thanks for the update ^_^