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for Someday, This Day

by diebyownhands

person Emzie
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Super sweet! And I'm glad that we got to see the "wedding" :)

Love you!
person eatmorefish
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome read :) This really showcases the old Jack and how emotional he is--it really clarifies his decisions during the time of Dustin's accident because we understand his character better with these little flashbacks. Great work :)
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I been wondering why I haven't seen "Reflections" up in awhile....now I know.

This chapter was beautiful. The vows they made up, especially Dustin's was so poignant and beautiful. I just wish that it all could have been true and life wasn't so cruel to them.

Great job! :)
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhah, this was really cute! :)

It makes me sad though to think they had so much love for one another; what went wrong?

But it's a great side-story!
person eatmorefish
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yayy first to review i hope? Ok so I think i liked this little sidestory/ficlet the best:) I loved to see their old life and they just fit so perfectly with eachother! The best part is that their dynamics seem soooo natural and fluid. Oh and looove Jack's mom too! Really liked this one :)