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Thank you so much for the update. This is a great story - and I do hope you both get inspiring ideas to continue it. I miss Sin so much... :-( and my heart aches with Boyd.

last updated ch: you know what i love about you guys...you tell a good story. omg. so good.

i was thinking how, if you started the story from Danny's perspective, you totally could've written a whole new book. you know how some action mysteries start with how the protagonist is living a normal life, only to find out a past life was wiped out via amnesia? and all these strange things occur (like boyd coming into his life) that takes them on a journey to find themselves and retrieve memories. etc. it's so great that your story has so many possibilities. it's just wonderful to realize.

anyway, i reaallllly enjoyd the interaction between boyd and danny!! in fact, i almost want to call danny sin again. XD so hard so hard.

i like how sin ARGH DANNY I MEAN DANNY is still so perceptive. it's nice to see he's not a total numbskull lol. i wonder if he ever questions his insane abilities to hear, his strength, yadda yadda and wonders where he got them from.

great chapter i enjoyed it! can't wait to see what happens from here!

sometimes I wonder if maybe Sin is 'retired'...as in, he's living this new life because he's being retired. instead of killing him they wipe his memories. that would be so sweet. anyway ch 15 was interesting. interesting to see boyd and danny interact like that. i'm gonna try calling him danny even though he's sin...

YAY for the story moving along! Thank you!!
But damn all the angst is hard to endure!
And the last sentence of chapter 17. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you guys sooo much!!! This story is by far the best I've ever read period. Even compared to the novels I've read, this still stacks up as the best. I can't wait til the next chapters!!!

I was sure Sin will see through Boyd's cover. Even with his memory lost, his skills remained. Not to mention his extra-abilities. Poor Boyd, he's so lovesick. He could never hide himself behind his usual mask when it's about Sin. My bet on the mole is still on Jon... I feel like the plot thickens at the Agency. I find it too odd that Boyd is being sent in these apparently innocent missions at the beach. With the same partner. Sometimes in mystery novels the worst enemy from the beginning turns into an ally in the end - I wonder if it will be the same with Bex.

I can't wait for more! You guys have me completely hooked!

Everything was going so well, too, and then you had to end it THERE! >:(

Alright, review / reactions:

1. I loved reading all three chapters. It felt too short but you could probably give me fifty chapters and I would still be like *grabby hands*
2. I didn’t like Bex in the beginning, but I’m amused by her now. I enjoy Tech, too. Wouldn’t mind seeing more of either of them.
3. I don’t get how Boyd is not even a tad suspicious of Jon. I guess there’s a total disconnect between my impression of Jon from reading the story and the way Boyd apparently perceives him. A part of me is convinced that you guys only made him look suspicious to throw readers off whoever the real bad guy is. As for Jeff, I’m curious to see what his interest in Boyd is about. I don’t think he’s the mole.
4. “First the bike and now the rain-- it was as if the universe was conspiring to give him a chance to be with Sin.” Thank you, universe Sonny & Ais.
5. !!! that Boyd and Sin finally got to hang out! :DDD Boyd noticing the parts of Sin’s mannerisms and personality that stayed intact was sweet.
6. Aww, Boyd + Kassian = BFF4eva!
7. I wouldn’t object to Kassian/Ryan.
8. I liked Leighton :( Her death is probably not as random as it seems, right?
9. #$%&#*
10. How did Sin see as Boyd as Tyler?

ICoS will never stop being one my very favorite things :) Thanks for writing!

Oh wow, that majorly sad. I did not expect the last chapter to end that way. I feel so bad for Boyd but I love the drama and tension it brings between him and Sin/Danny so that's excellent. Seriously awesome to pull that little plot-twist, I thought they would slowly become closer but Sin's super hearing has clearly ruined all that and I don't see Sin willingly contacting Boyd for awhile. Which is very sad and depressing and angsty, as indicated by the last few paragraphs.

But oh gods, Leighton is dead! I suspected something was up with Kassian's sisters but that totally shocked and saddened me. I get the feeling there is more behind her death so I hope that issue comes up later. And I'm glad I got some confirmation about Ryan/Kassian. I suspected something had happened there although I thought it was still on-going but seems (for now) to have ended. Dying to see all these things revealed.

I'm so excited for these new batch of chapters that I will be rereading them soon. I hope to get more Emilio/Carhart interaction in the next batch but that's just me. Keep up the awesome work. This series is addicting.

I love you for updating. This is the best story on the nets.

You two are my "moon and stars". I love this series and I am so honored that you post it for my enjoyment. Yes I realize it is also for the enjoyment of others but I always feel like you wrote your stories specifically for me lol. Looking forward to more!