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so happy was i yesterday to see a update. Soo close are yall to 5000 hits! i dont know if yall knew that but i think its kool. So happy that they have put the last couple of years behind them and are going to try something. Poor Emilio i dont think he was expecting that.

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Glad that Sin managed to find Boyd, knew he would, but did not know in what condition. Nevertheless, he seemed physically fine, but mentally, not so good, problems and issues more ingrained not easily fixed with good rest and recuperation.

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Dare I say that they have finally found each other (for now) and have finally voiced their true feelings that they would rather die than live without each other. Now we have a new direction, and organise and execute a plan before it is too late.

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More declarations of love, this time from Carhart about his feelings for Sin, Boyd, Ryan and finally to Emilio. Their twisted (or normal) relationship actually seems to have found a starting point for their commitment to work through it.

Fantastic chapters as always, direction more on admitting feelings, and now working for a common goal: escape before they die

And just when I as having a bad day... An update happened. I love you guys. And your characters. And this story. I love the fact that the actual plot-plot is complicated and unpeedictable. I love that the character interactions are interesting and well thought out. I love the action, I love the drama, I love it all!

Poor Emilio. He's been used one way or another all his life and he learned how to deal with it and take his own advantages. But the hardest thing is to learn to want more and to expect more.

Also, I was so relieved to see Boyd and Sin back together. The tension was almost unbearable the previous chapters.

Thank you for these new chapters. The story got to a point where everything was so tense and the relationships between the characters seemed unsolvable, but now things look up again. I'm always looking forward to reading more!

Inwish I had reviewed with every chapter but I was too engrossed in reading!!

First off, poor Ryan!!! :( He needs someone to love too, especially now that Emilio and Zachary have made up.

The sense of foreboding overshadowing all the happy events has me on edge...

But wow the reunion between Boyd and Sin in the kitchen- that just about had me squealing and tearing up at the same time. Haha

I guess soon will be when they all try to either escape or bring down Seong... The former option being more likely.

Thanks for the great chapters! I love this series.

Hello~ its almost been a month since your last update so....poke. poke lol im sure your both quite busy but just wante dyou to know that some of us have not forgotten about you or your story. We look forward to more hopefully really really soon.

Awesome stuff! Thanks for the update. Sin is just phenomenal - great seeing him in action :-)

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...that......was awesome!

i sure hope boyd is there, all this chicken trailing is getting to me. i hope boyd isn't that far gone either T_T poor boyd. not knowing what's going on from his POV is killin' me!

i am waiting for the moment that they reunite e.e

emilio is getting on my nerves a bit. he's so sassy. too sassy for me XD

i like how sin is so blunt and to the point. i like the way he thinks, 'cut the crap, just tell me what i want to know'. lol

anyway, AWESOME update! i enjoyed it.

really curious why sin is pushing Adam's text(?) away though, or why sin hasn't checked in with what Adam was trying to contact him about. you'd think he'd give it a second thought since sin probably doesn't get texts a lot (no friends to text him) lol

anyway, cat!

Welcome back to the ‘original Sin’. The conversation with Bex about what keeps Boyd hanging around was a classic Sin retort, and a perfect introduction to his return.

Thought reading the extended report was sure to break him, but it had proved to reinforce his need to find Boyd. However, finding out about his father and Boyd, well that had a nasty outcome.

The relationship between Emilio and Sin is inexplicable to say the least, but it for some twisted reason it works. Their coarse behaviour leaves little to be desired, and they make no allowances for it. Nevertheless, when they are working together, there is a tendency to want to goad them in their exploits (their tag team routine on Tech, was nicely written).

Even though Jon Logan was the mole, it has done nothing to help with the anxiety regarding Boyd. Really feeling unsure about what is happening (or happened) to him, and what they will find after nearly seven weeks with possible subjection to bio-weaponry testing. Although, with his 'enhancements' over the years, he may stand a better chance of survival if he has been subjected to testing. Cannot wait to find out!

Would concur with Sin's last thought, if Boyd is found (and alive) they need to disappear for good.

Thanks for another great one!

Great new chapters, guys! I liked the most the interaction between Sin and Emilio. Their confrontation was a brilliant episode! Emilio, the textbook bad father, really loves his son. Not sure Sin loves Emilio and inclining to think he doesn't. He probably has more feelings for Carhart. Or maybe there is no room in his heart, being completely taken over by his passion for Boyd.

It is interesting how Sin denies Danny as a vague memory. Danny is what he would have been if not for all the mess the Agency brought into his life. Danny was a genuine part of his personality. I confess I liked that part. Another change in Sin - he once fought for his humanity and against his unwanted enhancements, now he seems to embrace his whole superhuman persona. I guess we'll see how high he can jump etc in the ultimate confrontation towards which the story seems to be going.

I was not surprised by Jon turning out to be the mole. He was my only 'suspect' since the beginning.

And Sin, call Adam Blake! It's very important! *shakes finger*