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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story, thank god Sin is alive, I literally cried for the first 8 chapters because of Boyd's pain. You're excellent writers, I'm terribly invested in these characters. Can't wait for the next ch!
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June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for resurrecting Sin!! :) The agency has stolen so much from them -- I want them to be happy so badly. Your writing is so arresting. I feel Boyd's love and pain. I hope seeing Boyd triggers something in Sin... please... Love it. Thanks!
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June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Re-read the beginning, after reading the review before mine. Gosh, indeed it was Danny/Hsin who made the police report. I wonder if anyone discovered it was Hsin. Boyd aka "The Void" should kidnap Hsin and run off - and live happily ever after. :-) Love the way you put it together.
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June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O.O...I knew he wasn't dead. I am beyond happy right now. There are no words to explain how excited I am for the next chapters!!! SIN'S NOT DEAD!!!! Boyd go get yo man! lol
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June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaand I've soiled myself. Good job!
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June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh,thank you for not killing him!!!
What will happen next? I have no idea!
At the beginning when I made a guess that Danny is Sin, I was sad because of it because I knew that then the real reunion will be postponed (since Sin wouldn't know who Boyd is), still thank you for bringing him back into the story now! I was seriously depressed because of his absence.
Hm, I can't help but hope that in the next chapters there will be a lot of Sin/Boyd interaction.
This is the difficult part, you probably already have in mind how they will become closer again, damn, it seems like a lot of intricate work, I admire you guys :)
This story has always been really original and wonderful, so I expect it will continue to be so ;)
I can't wait to see...if you're gonna make Sin fall in love with Boyd all over again without remembering their past,...how will Sin remember and what will be the trigger or is it gonna be somehow idk by giving him some drug or medicine so he'll get his memory back... I have a little fantasy that he'll see his own name on Boyd and that will spark something in his mind... (well at least when he comes to, he'll be possessively glad that it's there)
Oh Boyd, you're gonna *seduce* him again aren't you? haha...
I hope the next update will come soon.
Love you guys xx
What will happen next? I have no idea!
At the beginning when I made a guess that Danny is Sin, I was sad because of it because I knew that then the real reunion will be postponed (since Sin wouldn't know who Boyd is), still thank you for bringing him back into the story now! I was seriously depressed because of his absence.
Hm, I can't help but hope that in the next chapters there will be a lot of Sin/Boyd interaction.
This is the difficult part, you probably already have in mind how they will become closer again, damn, it seems like a lot of intricate work, I admire you guys :)
This story has always been really original and wonderful, so I expect it will continue to be so ;)
I can't wait to see...if you're gonna make Sin fall in love with Boyd all over again without remembering their past,...how will Sin remember and what will be the trigger or is it gonna be somehow idk by giving him some drug or medicine so he'll get his memory back... I have a little fantasy that he'll see his own name on Boyd and that will spark something in his mind... (well at least when he comes to, he'll be possessively glad that it's there)
Oh Boyd, you're gonna *seduce* him again aren't you? haha...
I hope the next update will come soon.
Love you guys xx
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June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was totally awesome! That really made my day :)
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I remember a time when I didn't like Boyd at all....Now I frigging love him! I glad he did go do something REALLY stupid! Like sleep with his dead boyfriends father because of lack of self control.... :) now i wanted them to 'get in it' for a long time, but now it's just so wrong! but still hot! Lol and I could barely read that whole tattoo because the tears was ruining my vison! Ya had me crying AGAIN! my family looking that me all crazy and shit! :D but it was so beautiful and powerful and epic! <3 anyway that new marsall lady is fucking AWESOME!!! Why is she so damn GANGSTA!? I think a love her!lol and bex really needs to STFU for her sake! Boyd mother wins the most terrible person in ICoS award IMO! Just a pure BITCH! heartless even! I hope Boyd makes more field trips to the reaper building because he came up with more empty handed then when he walked in there
I frigging fired up and I can't wait for the next chapters! :D Go go chocobo!
I frigging fired up and I can't wait for the next chapters! :D Go go chocobo!
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I knew it. But the question is, what happened to Sin? Brainwashed to act as a normal person until something triggers memories or some code of instructions he's supposed to carry out. Oh Boyd... You're goin to go through heaven and hell before you'll get Sin back... If he ever remembers.
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read/skimmed part Kassian's chapter and read all off chapter 11. I might come back a leave another review when I have time to truly sit down and actually read closely. But, yay, new update!! \o/ Sin obviously wasn't dead so that revelation didn't surprise me nearly as much as it did Boyd. I'm happy that you're not so evil as to delay Sin's triumphant return to the story to the end of Fade. XD And excited to find out what is going on with the Sin-Living-As-Danny situation!
Jon is fucking suspicious. Maybe I'm just paranoid, but I've been feeling that there's something off about him since level 10 training and in all his scenes since. He's too perfect, too bland, too ???. All your characters are interesting, so when a character that lacks a distinct personality comes along, I get suspicious (lol). When Carhart mentioned that there was a high ranking traitor among their ranks in Chapter 5, I immediately thought of Jon. Now Harriet's comments about him makes me more certain that he won't turn out to be one of the good guys.
I looove missions, especially undercover missions (partly because Unit 16 and watching the characters play dress up are one of my favorite things). Every time Carhart introduces their next mission, I get a flutter of excitement in my heart.
Thank you for writing! The update made my day. :)
Jon is fucking suspicious. Maybe I'm just paranoid, but I've been feeling that there's something off about him since level 10 training and in all his scenes since. He's too perfect, too bland, too ???. All your characters are interesting, so when a character that lacks a distinct personality comes along, I get suspicious (lol). When Carhart mentioned that there was a high ranking traitor among their ranks in Chapter 5, I immediately thought of Jon. Now Harriet's comments about him makes me more certain that he won't turn out to be one of the good guys.
I looove missions, especially undercover missions (partly because Unit 16 and watching the characters play dress up are one of my favorite things). Every time Carhart introduces their next mission, I get a flutter of excitement in my heart.
Thank you for writing! The update made my day. :)