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for Olsen

by Laevi

person Jamie Weaver
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you know i love your stories. however i wish i could of seen more on olsen life, what did he do during the first week when he got the email and while they were together. but i must say a great story
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your new story.... Finally another story with a bear... there isn't many out there... can't wait for more
person kylee123
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the new story Laevi. Jack was so brave to reach out to Olsen like that. I wish more of us were brave enough to reach out for what we want in our lives. Love the Whipped Cream play. Outrageous! I hope to read some more soon.
person Julia
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

The story is great!

I like your descriptions and the speed of the action.
The dirty talk was just that and I loved it, very good.

By the way, thanks for a real man and not some pretty boy fucking another.


Thanks for the story.
person js
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome
another great story

i really love ur style
and everything
cant wait to read more