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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's a little on the short side but interesting. I like your word flow but certain things could be better phrased. Also watch the grammar and your tenses. I've only read three chapters but I'm a bit curious to see where you'll take this.
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Clever Idea, I was sort of thinking of writing something similiar to this, but that missing killer Bunny never got born. Enjoy your writing style... it makes me read every word because, I don't want it to end. Look forward to reading more. G