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I am so glad that Ashley is Knarly's borther. That gives him and Max plenty of chances to check each other out. Of course now I am all worried about Jake and what he has been doing. I have to admire his sneaking out technique though. I wonder if he gets back into the house the same way.

Aww Max you can be such a jerk and you don't even realize it. I think Ashley can help him out with that lol. Please update soon I got so excited when I saw it was updated.

Hey Asher, who's really a boy! lol Love that! One of my favorite characters on here, named Asher, from Mahsa's "Muffin" and now the sequel, "Matthew". You gotta read these stories, "Muffin" first, of course. They are incredible! Anyway, Asher's definitely NOT a nice guy, but ya gotta love him! lol

So, this is how stupid I am: isn't an MP3 player like an Ipod, or practically the same thing?

And I love Max's thinking: that Craigslist thing where people buy stuff. He's too funny! And he beat up two seven year old kids when he was thirteen, lol.

But on the serious side, Max does need to interact with other people. He sort of forgot how to socialize and actually spending time with his family would help him "practice" being a human being. Because he really is a shit, just like Jake said.

Great chapter! I can't wait for more! Oh, I noticed one typo: premiss should be premise.

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! omg Ashley is Knarly's bro!!! didn not see that coming man. Keep up the great work. Seriously. Post. Again. Soon

I really do love this story and thanks for the longer chapter it was awesome. Keep up the good work. I think I love Ashley even more so now because he isn't a push over and can put Max in his place. Max is starting to open up more which is nice. Knarly is hilarious and way out there lol. I know its crazy and won't happen but how epic would it be if Jake and Knarly started dating. lol Great update can't wait till the next one!!

As Ashley is adorable and so sweet. Max needs some work to say the least but he is still likeable. Please update soon. I really love this story.

awesome, awesome, awesome!! you are such a talented writer!!! please add more and longer chapters :D CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!

Omg Asher! Max really needs to chill....I cannot believe he was so rude to Ashley, who btw I thought was a girl! hahahah

And yeah, Idk about the fem/slash; I only read the m/m slash. Go figure that one! lol But I googled slash once and all these websites came up, proving that I am not the only female around who reads gay porn! Yay me! So yeah, kinda weird, huh?

It is a pleasure though, reading a story from a male perspective, so thank you for writing Asher! And plus you have the name of one of my favorite characters on this site! lol Watch it's just your pen name and you're really a girl....

"fuck being asexual. Max wants him."

BEST LINE EVER. :D

cant wait for the next!!!

Hey Asher! Yay, a male actually writing m/m stories; go figure! lol

Anyway, Max sounds like an interesting guy. I'm looking forward to reading more! (Hopefully longer chapters! Hint, hint) :)