rate_review Reviews

Love the story. But I am still worried about max's nose.

Noooo... don't stop writing, not when things are getting hot! :)

Scrap this and I will come to the Ukraine, cold be damned, and stab you to death with an icicle.

I have to admit, I'm insanely curious about how Max and his little brother will resolve their little issue.
Also, just a hunch, but I'm pretty sure Ash's bad past is a result of the same guy as Max.
I really hope they get the chance to kick his ass.

All in all, still enthralled.

Damn, their burgers are getting cold. hahahha

That whole conversation when Max called Ash back had me laughing hysterically!

And what do you mean Pluto isn't a planet anymore? Did the solar system change so much since I've been out of school? lol

Great chapter Asher! Looking forward to more! Thanks for updating so quickly! :)

I had missed your story updates :( . it made me so happy to finally see this. and poor jake. I demand you fix him

These characters are so amazing. So easy to relate to, so worthwhile, with this wonderfully entertaining profound irreverence. I found this fic this past week and read most of it in a day and have raved about it to everyone without the sound of my voice. Wish I had your talent. Thank you for sharing!!

Hey, this is beautiful.

And, um, I'm going into my second art class ever so I still royally suck but I'm more than willing to use your characters as a base for when I'm messing with portraiture and acrylic paint and sharing whatever fail might result.
So.
Yeah.
Could you possibly e-mail me a concise character description of...everyone? I kinda wanna use them all. Even Max's dad who's...never mentioned, really. Except for looking tired.
Because I will never be able to get an image from someone's writing of appearance unless they spend like...three paragraphs describing each feature. Which is ridiculous.
In case the 'Anonymous' bit keeps you from seeing my e-mail, contact me at eeginsane@gmail.com and I'll give you the real one from there.

Oh Asher!!!!! You're back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)


Hey, moving to a foreign country (Ukraine, wth? lol) is NO excuse not to update! lol Just kidding....moving to another country must be so difficult; getting all new doctors, learning how to drive on the wrong side of the road...etc. (I don't even know if this is true in the Ukraine...hey, do they even have CARS there? lol j/k

So you gradutated? And you found a job in the Ukraine? I hope all is well...I hate to ask about you-know-who.....but I miss his story too. :(

Anyway, on to the review. I also had to re-read the last chapter. I did think it was just as good tho as the first time I read it.

Loved this new chapter. (although on my computer, the print was really small) I feel so bad for Jake. Max didn't see THAT one coming! Jake really needs to get past this; nothing will come of it. (not that kinda story, lol)

I'm glad Ash and Max are growing closer. It's about freaking time! :) Still curious as to what's going on with Ashley and the whole museum parking lot thingy.

Ok, well Asher, hope you're enjoying your new country and I hope you update again soon! :) Missed you....

For the love of God boy, COME BACK!!!!!!!!

Hey Asher.....just wondering how you're doing. Haven't heard from your or your b/f in quite awhile! I know school's out now, so I was wondering how things are looking on the story update front? Just giving you a little poke,poke, hint, hint. I've been missing both your stories!

Hope all is well and have a great Memorial Day! :)