rate_review Reviews

I am so sorry I haven't reviewed chapter 2 yet but I didn't realize you had uploaded it until now.
I was too busy working on my own new story that I haven't been paying much attention to anything else.
By the way, thanks so much for leaving a review on my story too. It was very kind of you and I really
appreciate it and I don't have a beta so if ever catch anything really bad in my story please let me
know so I can fix it.

Now, I was so pleased to find out you did update this story because I enjoyed chapter 1 so very much.
I never would have guessed that they can control the elements that's a very nice twist to your story.
I think Sterling is going to have to keep Johnny under control so he doesn't set his brother on fire. LOL.
So since Vega sees auras does that mean he can make out what people are feeling or if they are friends or
enemies.

This is a really cool concept to your story and I was surprised by it and never would have suspected something like this.

Hi,

It was nice to see that you had uploaded chapter 2 sooner than expected so, "Thank you!"

So, now we are learning more about Johnny's and Vega's past and that they (and also Sterling) are
'elementals'. Which I think is a really cool concept, plus a nice twist to story, that I didn't
see coming.

I think Johnny has a little bit of a bad temper, LOL, but think Sterling can keep him under
control.

I checked out the forum and saw all your answers to the reviews. It's really neat you can do that.

Catch ya later in Chapter 3,

W.T.

This story is getting even more interesting as it progesses and I love it.

At least now we have a little more background on why there is so much tension
between Johnny and Rhys. For some reason, Rhys, abandoned his younger brother and
took off leaving him to fend for himself against some people we haven't been
introduced to yet. Who are these 'hunters' and why are they after Johnny and his
brother?

The show 'Heroes' came to my mind after reading this chapter.

I like that you put a review question/answer discussion thing up too.

I was surprised and never would have guessed that they were elementalists. It's really kind of neat they can
control different things like that. I really don't think it's a good idea for Rhys to piss off his fire ball
throwing brother especially around his house with wife and child nearby. I am worried now they hunters or whoever they really are (government people or scientists?) will find them and try to experiment on them or something awful
like that.

Please keep up the good writing and you are a great writer.

Chapter 2 Review

Oh my gosh! That was definitely a surprise and one I didn't even see coming. What a way to fool your readers!
You are amazing! I still would like to know how Vega thought that by drugging Johnny it would help him. I am kind of confused how Vega arrived at that idea unless he knew Sterling would be the one that would be drawn to Johnny.
I just read a book called I am Number Four by Pittacus Lore and the main character has to learn to use powers and one of them is kind of like Johnny's. You should check the book out and there was a movie just out about it too.

I was so happy to see another new chapter up and glad I checked. Do you plan on updating new chapters on weekends or weekdays? I will check back for your response under the review topic section of forum that you put up for us.

Enjoy the rest of you weekend!!!

Hi it's me again,

Vega did set it up at the club for Johnny and Sterling to meet. I just wanted to clear up any misunderstanding from my previous review because I kind of misunderstood the situation but figured it now sine I read chapter 2 over again.

Man....Johnny is going to kill Vega....slowly and painfully haha

Great work here, love the angst and emotions!

I adore stories where young men are tied up and punished with toys and all sort of other delicous devices. I bet Sterling will become Johnny's master or already is and he doesn't know it yet. Johnny's brother is behind this
but why? I am dying to know.

This story is very hot and steamy. I hope you update more often than monthly or bi-monthly because the
waiting will kill me.

I really liked the first chapter and wonder whether or not Johnny will be held prisoner by
this Sterling. Why on earth would his brother drug his rum and coke? I like it so hope you
will continue with it.