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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! how GREAT is this?? HOT HOT HOT!! I really like the persistance and stubbornness of both of the main characters!! tensions mounting high and such...written very well, one of my favorite stories I've read in a LONG TIME!! full of good humor, hot sex, and interesting characters!! LOVE!! keep it up!!! (and at least one vote for faster than bi-weekly updates (if you can, of course) ;) )
<3 hitachiintwinlover
<3 hitachiintwinlover
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is filling out. You started with this air of mystery while also giving us readers what we wanted to read while getting us hooked all at once. Kudos to you, and I cannot wait until the next chapter.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No you can't end there I wanted to see what Johnny did >.<
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Johnny is playing hard to get, LOL, he's being stubborn isn't he but Sterling is persistant and won't quit. I am getting curious about this Jace and bet that Johnny's curiosity gets the better of him and he goes back to Club Elemental to find out more about him.
I love chocolate chip cookies too!!!
I love chocolate chip cookies too!!!
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Issue a Challenge chapter;
I loved how Sterling kept running into Johnny no matter where he was and mentioning something about them possibly having formed a bond (is that like a for life or till death do us part sort of thing?) and think that Johnny is denying it but probably feels the same 'pull' that Sterling does but will never admit it.
Is Jace like a chameleon (sp.?) elemental? I bet he is dangerous and look forward to finding out more about him.
I keep thinking that Johnny might have signed something other than what he thought he was signing about being drugged by his brother at Sterling's club) or that maybe Sterling snuck a contract regarding a Sub/Dom kind of thing into the same paperwod and Johnny didn't notice so signed it.
I loved how Sterling kept running into Johnny no matter where he was and mentioning something about them possibly having formed a bond (is that like a for life or till death do us part sort of thing?) and think that Johnny is denying it but probably feels the same 'pull' that Sterling does but will never admit it.
Is Jace like a chameleon (sp.?) elemental? I bet he is dangerous and look forward to finding out more about him.
I keep thinking that Johnny might have signed something other than what he thought he was signing about being drugged by his brother at Sterling's club) or that maybe Sterling snuck a contract regarding a Sub/Dom kind of thing into the same paperwod and Johnny didn't notice so signed it.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think Johnny was jealous of Jace but doesn't realize it's the pully thingy Sterling was talking about. I think Johnny is in for one rude awakening the next time he goes to Sterling's club and that Jace will be the catalyst that draws it out.
Very good chapter and I loved how everytime Sterling would pop up and then Johnny would get annoyed.
Happy Easter if you celebrate the holiday that is, I do!
Very good chapter and I loved how everytime Sterling would pop up and then Johnny would get annoyed.
Happy Easter if you celebrate the holiday that is, I do!
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you kept your promise to update Bitter Sweet before the weekend.
It does seem like Sterling is 'stalking' Johnny since they keep running in to each other around every corner. If there is a bond/pull between them from their 'coupling', I wonder what it will entail for Johnny and how much power Sterling could have over him. I think Johnny was a tiny bit jealous of this Jace too. I don't think Jace is a danger to Johnny because Sterling seems to trust him.
Very good chapter,
W.T.
It does seem like Sterling is 'stalking' Johnny since they keep running in to each other around every corner. If there is a bond/pull between them from their 'coupling', I wonder what it will entail for Johnny and how much power Sterling could have over him. I think Johnny was a tiny bit jealous of this Jace too. I don't think Jace is a danger to Johnny because Sterling seems to trust him.
Very good chapter,
W.T.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just know Johnny's going to check out that bookstore Sterling told him about that specializes in male pleasure and will somehow payback Sterling with what he learns on his own. He probably will go back to Club Elemental to taunt Sterling by flirting with Jace and end up destroying poor Sterling's club somehow.
Will be keeping an eye out for new update next Friday.
Will be keeping an eye out for new update next Friday.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I detect romance is in the air for Johnny and Sterling sometime soon. Does being bonded mean like they are married or something? I love how Sterling is not giving up on wooing Johnny. I am looking forward to Johnny going back to the club and what will happen. I am interested in learning more about this new elemental Jace and what role he plays. Is he good friends with Sterling? I love this story.
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just realized you had uploaded another new chapter and almost missed reading it!! Shame on me for being a bad girl!!! I would hate myself because I love this story so far.
I really think it was a good idea to give us Sterling's point of view that way we get to see another side
of things from another perspective. I think he really likes Johnny and would have probably beat up whoever it was that drugged Johnny but couldn't because it turned out to be Johnny's brother Vega.
I really like Johnny and Sterling as a couple. It's like since Johnny can control Fire and Sterling water, hell ya, they are a perfect match and Vega knew it. So that's one good brownie point in Vega's favour after pulling a dangerous stunt like drugging his kid brother with pheromones.
So, Vega was 18 when he abandonded Johnny so how old is Johnny?
I was also wondering where Johnny used fire out in the open wouldn't someone have possibly seen him and reported it to the police or something? Wasn't that kind of foolish on his part if he doesn't want to get caught by whovever was after them when they were kids? Are there only a select few who can do that kind of thing? and how? were they born that way?
I really think it was a good idea to give us Sterling's point of view that way we get to see another side
of things from another perspective. I think he really likes Johnny and would have probably beat up whoever it was that drugged Johnny but couldn't because it turned out to be Johnny's brother Vega.
I really like Johnny and Sterling as a couple. It's like since Johnny can control Fire and Sterling water, hell ya, they are a perfect match and Vega knew it. So that's one good brownie point in Vega's favour after pulling a dangerous stunt like drugging his kid brother with pheromones.
So, Vega was 18 when he abandonded Johnny so how old is Johnny?
I was also wondering where Johnny used fire out in the open wouldn't someone have possibly seen him and reported it to the police or something? Wasn't that kind of foolish on his part if he doesn't want to get caught by whovever was after them when they were kids? Are there only a select few who can do that kind of thing? and how? were they born that way?