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I loved this chapter and the way poor Johnny melted (just like butter) in Sterling's expert and capable hands. Well, at least they didn't fight but am wondering whether or not that will happen when Johnny wakes up.

I love this story (it's one of my favorites) so thanks for updating.

By the way, I don't see any reason for editing it because it looks fine to me.

I forgot to mention I vote for an update list and want to be added to it for all your stories.

Thank you!!!!!

Ooooh, I think Johnny is finally coming around where Sterling is concerned.
It was funny how he tried to be so cool and in control of the situation but
the minute Sterling started working his 'magic' touch on him everything
changed.

It was almost like Sterling and Johnny were acting like a married couple.

I loved when Sterling said to Johnny, "We just had great sex be happy."

THis was awesome, haven't logged in. Do you have an update e-mail or something. Cause I'm away a lot with my job and can't always check every day whether there's an update or not, so sometimes I have to search through tons of pages.

Anyway I really loved it and can't wait to see how it carries on. Well done!

Huggins Aduial

I loved this chapter and now am really curious as to what Sterling has planned for Johnny. Especially, when Jace and Sterling said the following:

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He doesn’t stand a chance, does he?” Jace asked, grinning.

“Nope, we’ll be a lot more than fuck buddies by the time I’m done.”

“Thought so,” Jace’s voice was dry, “That poor kid had no warning. He may be stubborn but you’re somewhat of a force of nature.”

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Personally, I don't think Sterling should try messing with Johnny like that because he might have some surprises of his own up his sleeve and twist whatever Sterling is planning around until Sterling is butter in his hands.

I really love this story so thanks for updating.

I love this story a lot. Sterling totally has my heart and I can't wait till he takes over Johnny's. Damn! This is hot <3 <3 <3

I thought it was funny how the guy at the bookstore was intimidated by Johnny. You would think he would be used to all types of characters that come into it.

Hmm, Sterling, Sterling, Sterling, you naughty man. What are you planning?

I think Johnny is gonna find out he's biting off more than he can chew.

Jace is a bit mystery to me still and I am dieing to find out what's up between him and Johnny.

On a side note, something tells me Sterling doesn't bottom for anyone. LOL. Poor Johnny!!

I was happy to see new chapter up this quick so "thank you."

I really laughed at the scene in the bookstore and how flustered the poor guy was in front of Johnny.
I don't think Johnny enjoyed his practice session in the bathtub and that's what frustrated him so much because he knows he wants Sterling's hands on him.

Sterling is really pulling Johnny's strings and he doesn't even realize it yet but when he does, watch your 'goods' Sterling.

I love the mystery behind Jace's secret powers and wonder what's up with him and Johnny.

On a side note, do you have to sign up in the forum section in order to ask you more questions about story?

what the hell! jhonny is giving in? what happened to the days the when people said no, they meant it and didn't give in? Ugh, his lack of will power is pathetic. Again his brother and some random ass guy.. His brother drugged him for fuck's sake, and he just forgave him? ridiculous! utterly ridiculous.

'Bring it on, Sterling'

Johnny is up to your challenge and I don't think you will know what hit you, LOL.

I think Sterling is going to regret the gauntlet he threw to Johnny and bet the 'fireworks' are literally going to
explode.

I am really curious about this Jace Elemental and will he be a threat to Johnny.