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for Bitter Sweet

by writeaddict

person lividfire
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
'I want to top.'
So do I, but mother nature says NO so now I cryT_T
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haha I love the last part....it was all going well for Sterling until Johnny wanted to top. LMAO! *starts chanting "top top top top"* Hopefully, Sterling will take it well.... XD
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha, it seems that Sterling is really getting to Johnny, although Johnny would never admit it!

Ths circus sounded awesome; I always loved the circus! :)

And I CANNOT see someone like Sterling being "submissive" to anyone! Not that guys that bottom are submissive, just that I can't see it w/his personality! lol
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When will the next chapter be up?
person mashael
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! am dead
love your story please countnu
person snowleopard
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, you updated and I am so happy. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

I thought this chapter was so sweet between Sterling and Johnny. I loved every bit of it.
Johnny is so cute and adorable but I don't think he would want to know that and Sterling
is so magnificant.

Thanks again for updating.
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so much better w/o the fire/water/element sci-fi stuff! :)

Great chapter, lol! Can't wait for more! :)
person Will Treaty
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you just have to love these two elementals especially the way they have sex.

I really enjoyed this chapter it was very well written and I was happy to have checked
back and found you had posted new chapter.

Good job,

W.T.
person JtheChosen1
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent one here! Hope for more plot in the next one!
person Jetfire
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Right, firstly I've actually managed to log onto my account again (go me). Secondly that's pretty cool, may at it just to my faveourites list on my computer so I don't have to search the whole AFF website...which they had an update system, and check fridays, if and when I'm home. I love this...great sex scene and Johnny is so cute in his stubborness.

I'm really glad to have found a good story, its so hard to find any out there. Mostly its just tons and tons of angst, or bad grammar or spelling or both. Anyway, thanks for this, in case people do vote for an update list, then you know my e-mail adress :-)

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