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for Bitter Sweet

by writeaddict

person steph
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story :)

i would love to be on the upudating list...

i dont know if you can see my email address, but its blondie-1201@hotmail.com

thanks,
Steph
person Jetfire
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Firstly *YAY* *claps hands* sooo cute, and I got two chapters out of it, somehow missed one, htat means I missed reviewing that one...feel so bad :(. I just love Johnny he's so cute the way he acts all stubborn and don't careish, bet he's a little marshmallow inside really.

Secondly def want on the update list, so I don't miss a chapter again! Dang AFF and not having things like Fanfiction where you can add faveourite story or author. Very annoying. Anyway worth the wait though, your story is. Now I saw your review on Rocking Daisuke, I do want to continue it, but I'm a bit stuck at the moment, but if you want to drop me an email, I'll let you know when I have struggled through my writers block.

Huggins Aduial
person miles
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story ! I like it so far...
Is he going to forgive his brother ?
Keep writing, please ! XD
person cbs2
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this story!!! could you possibly add me to the alert list for it?? thanks :) coobs2@hotmail.com
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please be sure to put me on your update list for all your stories, ok?

I loved this chapter and it was fun reading things from Sterling's perpective. I really adore these two guys very much.

I didn't think Sterling would bottom but it turned out to be very sweet indeed with the way he still was in control of everything even though Johnny didn't realize it.

I also liked the waxing part too and that Johnny is finally committing by agreeing to be tested with him even though he's never been with anyone else but Sterling.

person Roya7777
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this! Well, I didn't think sterling would be THIS ok being the bottom but it makes it even more interesting! :D

The fact that S is into M/S and BDSM and what seems like a hard and eventful past for J, I think, would make things a little bit complicated! I don't think J like the pain that much and as S told him, everything was vanilla up until now! I think J should built up more trust to let S do whatever he wants to do with J!!! and that would be interesting!

I sure do looking forward for your next update! ^_^ thanksss
person CelticThunderFan
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My email is celticthunder2010@yahoo.com and thank you!!!!
person reader1962
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story but would like you to post new chapters quicker
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, things are definitely starting to get very interesting between Sterling and Johnny. I loved the part at the circus. Hmmm. I think Johnny actually shocked Sterling with his request and am dying to know if he will bottom but don't think it's gonna happen.

I didn't realize you had updated. Sorry it took so long for me to review.
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter and the way Sterling and Johnny are getting to know each other better.

I don't think Sterling is going to take bottoming very well but I bet he would do it for Johnny.

I look forward to finding out his reaction to Johnny's request.