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for Bitter Sweet

by writeaddict

person miles
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter ! They're very cute together ! ^^
BDSM... Humm ! Can't wait ! :))
person CelticThunderFan
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! FINALLY!!!!! I was really starting to get worried you would never update again but just checked my email and there it was......a message new chapter was up and I whooped with joy! I've really missed this story.

Anyway, I totally loved this newest chapter and how Johnny and Sterling's relationship is blossoming. BDSM!!! I can't wait to see how that who scene plays out but with these guys it should proved to be very interesting. I think Johnny is so adorable and Sterling is so hot. I've really missed these guys and am glad they are back!

I see that Johnny and Vega still need to work out their differences about what happened when they were kids. I am also looking forward to the possible babysitting chapter and hope Sterling gets his hands dirty in diapers! LOL.

This story is very well written so personally I don't see what the problem with it was to begin with, it's perfect!

Looking forward to reading more, and please keep me on your mailing list.

P.S.

Please don't forget "Melt my Heart to Stone" I miss it too.
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!!!!!

I've missed you!!!!!

This chapter was nice and long plus it way deliciously yummy and I really liked it. I think your writing style is excellent and hope you are back on a role writing after such a long break.

I really can't wait until Johnny is introduced into Sterling's world of BDSM and like his friends; Constant and Michael whom I bet will become Johnny's new best friend before too long.

I am hoping you are back now and updating on a regular schedule again.


person Jetfire
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I figured out what it was, it landed in my junk mail folder cause I have strick privacy settings on my email account. Anyway I have now added you to the list that will show in my inbox and it worked, just awesome, would have been so upset if they'd had a "non-breakup" lol. I like that. But they do exist.
Really can't wait to be delved deeper into Johnny and why he's the way he is, his bf might want to take him to see a shrink though with all those issues, not something you can deal with all by yourself. Ok well thanks, don't stress too much, I'm probably going to rewrite some of Rocking Daisuke to get back into it. Take care Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Huggins
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Johnny is one strange dude! Hot and cold. Hopefully it'll work out for Sterling; he'll need a lot of patience to get through to Johnny's "indifferent" exterior.

Good luck with whatever you're doing when you're not writing this great story! :)
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for adding me to story update list, I was so excited when I saw message in my inbox this morning!

I feel so bad for Johnny, he obviously has some dark deep secrets he is harboring and I wish Sterling would try and be patient so he can work them out with him. It was almost like Johnny was displaying symptoms of a 'pregnant' woman with his sweet tooth, LOL.

Something bad has happened to Johnny and I would think Sterling would try and talk with his brother about it to find out more and try to help Johnny. They belong together and I am disappointed with Sterling giving up so easily because it's not like him.

I enjoyed new chapter and look forward to the next so hope you still will be able to update on Fridays.
Please be sure to keep us posted about updates and I think Melt My Heart to Stone is great the way it is but am sad it's on backburner but understand how hectic life can be.

Happy 4th!
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what! i wasnt expecting that. chap 2.
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,

very pleased this is being updated. One thing, you keep jumping back and forth between past and present tense. Other than that, yeah, it was a little predictable as you said, but fluffy angst, so good! ^_^
Oh and I finally found your review responses :P Glad to see you took it so well; you never know how people are going to react. So, mad props on that. If your updates will be irregular I wouldn't mind being on a mailing list. I swear I will find out how to display my email.
person cbs
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww sweet chapter, and its left me with a major craving for waffles!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am still enjoying this story so very much and will wait for you to update or finish it no matter how long it takes.
I adore Johnny and Sterling so hope they can work through this and eventually find happiness together.