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I just wanted to let you know that I really liked the first chapter and hope you write more. I wonder what
happened between the two brothers it must have been bad. I would like to know why he drugged Johnny and
left him alone at this club. I think Sterling took advantange of him in his weakened state and also think
he might have given him a drug at the end of chapter.

Update soon, this story has got my attention.

Hi,

I think this story is really interesting and what is going on at that club? Are places like that even legal in the U.S.? I don't care because I love this story so far and you've only written one chapter. Is it like some kind of, what do you call it, S&M Club? (not sure that's right).

So, how is Johnny going to react in the morning to find he slept with a total stranger and his brother might
have had something to do with it? Waiting to find out!!

I noticed you got a reviewer from one of the site moderators about your disclaimer so copied one that I think is
correct down below for you to check out. I don't know but that it might help you.


Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.

I hope you update soon. Very interesting first chapter and I want to read more of it.

This story is quite unique and I would like to know more about Johnny's background with his brother. Please keep up
the good work.

I think Johnny's brother gave him some kind of drug in his rum and coke. I am wondering why he would
have left him alone in a club like that so vulnerable but think he set it up with Sterling. I want to
find out what happens when he wakes up and will he be mad and have a confrontation with the mysterious
Sterling. I like this and hope you continue. I love BDSM stories.

So the whole thing was a set-up by Rhys? But why?

Great start to the story; I'm looking forward to reading more about these two guys. :)

I really enjoyed the first chapter of your story very much. I wonder what Rhys did to Johnny to make him
so mad at him. I also think that Rhys just set Johnny up with Sterling but not sure why yet. So, Johnny
was a virgin right? I am very curious as to why Rhys would do this to his brother. I am anxious to find
out how Johnny reacts to the news of what happened to him when he wakes up. What will he do to his brother?

Not what I was expecting, but good.

I have to admit that I rather enjoyed the first chapter very very much. I wasn't sure what it was
going to be about so took a peek and boy was I glad I did. I am not sure I like Rhys too much though.
What kind of brother is he anyway, drugging Johnny like that? I hope that Sterling doesn't put him
on the stage like that other couple Johnny saw earlier. By the story description, I am wondering
what role Ryhs will play in all this.

Anyhoo, very well written and I am hooked.

Good job,

W.T.

I like this story and can't wait to find out why Johnny's brother drug him at the club
and who this mysterious Sterling guy is. I hope he used a condom to protect Johnny
against any STD's!!!

I am also curious as to what kind of disagreement the brothers had that led to this.

Update again soon, ok.

P.S. Could you please mention in next chapter how often this story will be updated.