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where are u???? please come back.

Captivated. I like how you don't make this entirely about magic etc... You tend to forget they are more than human. I am maddened at the hints of Johnny's past/lifestyle away from Sterling! I want to KNOW what's going on there. The sex is way erotic! You are really subtle! I am hooked on this story! Hooked! I hope it continues on this path I'd hate to see it sizzle out as most good buildups tend to do! I have faith lol! One question though, I know Sterling is Dom but is Johnny's reluctance at being sub due to the fact that he is 'stronger' in a sense than Sterling? Magically that is! And who tormented his poor soul?????? Dying for answers! Keep doing what you're doing ;)

I really had the greatest urge to slap Sterling very hard on his thick skull after Johnny confessed he loved him and then Sterling says NOTHING!!!! SERIOUSLY!!!!! GRRRRR, I am so angry at him right now and he has a lot of explaining to do. Poor Johnny!!

Awww I really like his friends, especially Airee, he's cool. At least you actually have dynamics going on, it gets a bit tedious reading all the stories were everything is just dandy or people spend 25 chapters having sex. You'd think that a storyline was a good idea. Ah well, yours is sooo cool. Still loving it, carry on AMAZING.

Huggins Aduial

loved this. can't wait to know wat johnny does 4 work

I felt kind of bad for Johnny when he finally confessed to Sterling that he loved him but then Sterling didn't say it back to him. I love Airee and Cliff they are great friends for Johnny to have and the fact that Cliff helped heal Johnny's wounds was super. I am kind of upset with Sterling right now but can understand where he is coming from. I am still anxious to find out just what kind of job Johnny has and what happened to him.

Ch. 13: I really missed this story! It must be very hard for Sterling not being in control. He doesn't know what Johnny's job is, why he got hurt, and why he couldn't call him. Of course, it's driving me nuts too!!! And why didn't he tell Johnny he loved him back? Dumbass!! That is unforgivable! Especially after all he went through to win Johnny in the first place. He finally gets what he's been waiting for (a declaration of love) and he says nothing?!! And he even knows he hurt him by not saying it back but yet, he does nothing to rectify the situation. I'm kind of pissed about this. :)

I went back today and reread the first 11 chapters because it's been so long since I first read them. I forgot how freaking awesome this story is! I'm dying to know what Johnny does for a living! Spec. Ops? CIA type agent? Whatever it is, he got hurt badly. Also loved how he came to the bbq to see Sterling instead of going home to get better first. Sterling should know how Johnny feels about him. It made me tear up!

Happy New Year to you too! ^_^

It was a fantastic gift! thank you, I really missed the story :)

Nice, I really liked this, poor both of them, hopefully they'll manage to sort each other out. I'm not sure if I reviewed or not, I've been pretty busy moving and working and not having internet for a while, so if I only caught it when I had internet at work, sorry that I didn't review.

Its still great.

Huggins
Aduial