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April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I'm not sure if I'm supposed to feel any kind of sympathy for Gabe. If I am, I 'm sorry I just can't even force myself to feel bad for him.
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July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! Your description of your characters is really three dimensional; they seem like they could easily be real people. I like that you're working your way into the incest in a believable way. And your description of that dream was just hottt :) The only thing that threw me a little was when we suddenly got a bit of Bree's POV at the end of the second chapter, since up until then, the narration had been so strongly in Gabe's voice. Really solidly written, though, and I hope you post more!
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great start and I would love to read more!